Very engaging story.
The imagery in you word's is very pronounced.
Most of all however, I found myself to be emotionally invested in Alexandra's story.
I wonder if Alexandrias gift is partly if not wholly responsible for the funeral.
Anyway just a thought great story thank you for sharing this with us.
Thank you it's just the kind of feedback I was looking for - that the reader cares for this girl.
As for the funeral... we shall never know! But no, no. She's not responsible for that in my mind. But, that's something that can be left up to the
reader to decide.
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Just going to have a long lazy weekend this weekend. The usual crew will come over Saturday to play pool. Paul has a 20 mile run Saturday morning
but it is just a training run so I will sleep in.
I can't believe that she was back with the ex again last night. Like I said, she needs to figure out her before she drags anyone else into it.
[[[HUGS]]] Sorry Quant but you deserve someone that is going to put you as their #1!!!
Sounds like a fun weekend. She came over at 11:00 pm last night to pick up her things. She said I have to go back with he ex. I just said I
understand. But don't come running back next week. She looked sad and left.
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OMG, I didn't know about the last part!!! Yup, kick her to the curb and don't let her come back. Too many back and forth.
I honestly don't know how long it will take. His fastest marathon (26.2 miles) was just under 3 1/2 hours. It was like 3 hours and 28 minutes. He
ran a 50 K (31.1 miles) in under 5 hours.
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He takes snacks with him. He has these gummies that are sooo yummy!!! And power gels and all kinds of stuff. LOL
*I think the Gu gels are disgusting but the gummies are awesome!
For the 50K they have a food table at the halfway point. They have all kind of candy and fruit for the sugars and peanut butter & jelly sandwiches.
Its really funny to see these people running while shoving food in their mouths. LOL
The boss said he wanted to take off the day lol. I think he wants a lazy Friday. I am on salary so some days we will work many hours and some days a
few. It works out to be even pay lol