The Expressionless woman

reply to post by tport17


That's crazy!!!! UGH!!! Great work finding that gem!
Glad it is midday here lol, I would have wet my pants had I seen it at night!

Here I hope that this will be as close to the original as possible:

The Confession:

911 Operator: 911 What is your Emergancey?

Caller: I just killed someone, though they will never be able to prove it.

911 Operator: Who is they, and why won't they ever be able to prove it?

Caller: You MUST listen, 'They' are the police and they will never prove I did it because I was 3,000 miles away from the crime scene.

911 Operator: I'm sorry, you said you were three thousand miles away from the crime scene? How did you kill someone three thousand miles away?

Caller: I did it with Astral Projection. I went out of my body and killed the person. If you don't beleive me, there are parts of her all over Los Angeles. Her name is Greta Horner.

911 Operator: Alright we are sending the police to your location now.
~CLICK~

911 Operator: Hello, [pause] Hello?

911 operator says to dispatcher: I think they hung up, but you say the police are on the way?
Dispatcher: Yes they were sent to the gps guided location.

Twenty minutes later the police show up at my door. It doesn't matter, they can never get me for this crime. Even if I know every single detail of the murder, they'll just think I am some nutjob and send me to a psyche ward for evaluation and there will never be any reason to keep me. And I will have my confession and absolution in the eyes of God. I will not perish in the everlasting fire! I have committed the perfect crime! I answer the door and go with the officers without a fight.

Interrogation room:

Police Officer: You told the 911 Operator you killed someone three thousand miles away, is that correct?

Me: Yes, that is correct. I killed Greta Horner because she is the most vile creature that ever plagued this planet.*

Police Officer: And how did you do that?

Me: Well ever since that homewrecking harlot came into my life I have wanted to kill her.* I have been prcticing astral projection for many years and concentrating on manipulating solid objects and people. Finally, this week I mastered it, and I concentrated on the ***** botox face, and the next thing I knew I was in the room, in HER room and she was laying there asleep and at first I was just going to put my hand through her chest and concentrate on feeling her heart in my grip, touching the muscle, feeling it's solidity, then I was going to squeeze it until it burst, showing no marks on the outer flesh at all, where it would have been ruled a heart attack. But suddendly I got so violently angry that I could not control myself and I ripped a gaping hole in the chest and tore out the lungs and heart. Seeing the horror of what I had done I took into my arms the lifeless body and the heart and lungs and concentrated on raising myself above the rooftops and floating towards home. In my state I jsut started to drop the pieces along the way.

Police Officer: Well that is one crazy story, but we can't hold you, there is no evidence of any crimes in LA, we checked. But we are going to bring you to the psyche ward and have you evaluated.

Just as I'd suspected, but I'd be out in twenty four hours unless they could prove I was a danger, which they could not. I knew they had no proof of any crime being committed as of yet. Also they could never pin it on me because there was no plane ticket, no car rental, no gas receipts, and no paper trail whatsoever. And I had someone to vouch that I was at home asleep in Florida all night the time of the murder.

The next day I got out of the psyche ward, just as I had known I would. Nobody beleives in astral projection in the scientific realm, they are more likely to beleive I am a psychic at best. Then I read the news they found her lungs. I need to disappear before they find the rest of her.

So if you ask is it possible to be killed by someone astral projecting, I assure you the answer in unequivocally yes!

Some of this is probably not identical.

*wording changed in compliance with ATS T&C's.
ETA AND I forgot to add the news story link damit derp!!! LOL!


Lungs found on LA sidewalk

Originally posted by tport17
Love me some creepy pasta.

My first creepy pasta scared the ever loving crap out of me, and it has a youtube video to go with it. It's one of the most common stories so you may have even read it on a different website. If not, when you finish the story, search the story name on youtube and watch the video clip. I have real issues watching it. The story is written as if it was lifted from a discussion forum.

Candle Cove

This was one of my first creepy pastas too! I loved it! I did not see the end coming at all.

reply to post by ldyserenity


That was an awesome story!! With the article and everything! So good!

Side note here:

What the heck is with the news story?? Someone found lungs on a side walk? That is some crazy shiz!

reply to post by ucantcme


Yep and I thought up this story from that...there is a thread about the actual news article here on ATS.
I thought there were a lot of normal reasons they ended up there, but I wanted to make the most creepiest and out of the ordinary way to have them end up there... Especially since as of yet they have no details on where they come from or whose they are. BWAHAHAHAHA!

Originally posted by ucantcme

Originally posted by tport17
Love me some creepy pasta.

My first creepy pasta scared the ever loving crap out of me, and it has a youtube video to go with it. It's one of the most common stories so you may have even read it on a different website. If not, when you finish the story, search the story name on youtube and watch the video clip. I have real issues watching it. The story is written as if it was lifted from a discussion forum.

Candle Cove

This was one of my first creepy pastas too! I loved it! I did not see the end coming at all.

I'm still uncertain whether this show really existed or not. I did see people post on some youtube videos that they have seen it, are they s***** Us or are they for real? This is a very deep rabbit hole.

reply to post by ldyserenity

I'm pretty sure it is just people bs'ing to try and scare more people.

Originally posted by ldyserenity

Originally posted by ucantcme

Originally posted by tport17
Love me some creepy pasta.

My first creepy pasta scared the ever loving crap out of me, and it has a youtube video to go with it. It's one of the most common stories so you may have even read it on a different website. If not, when you finish the story, search the story name on youtube and watch the video clip. I have real issues watching it. The story is written as if it was lifted from a discussion forum.

Candle Cove

This was one of my first creepy pastas too! I loved it! I did not see the end coming at all.

I'm still uncertain whether this show really existed or not. I did see people post on some youtube videos that they have seen it, are they s***** Us or are they for real? This is a very deep rabbit hole.

It's not real.But it was one of my first pastas,too.Creepy as hades

Originally posted by fairguy
reply to post by Destinyone

 

No problem

I only just discovered that site tonight, gonna be spending some more time on there

I'm not sure I like it. I wouldn't want anyone changing anything about my stories. Is there a way to stop this at Creepypasta?

Originally posted by ldyserenity

Originally posted by ucantcme

Originally posted by tport17
Love me some creepy pasta.

My first creepy pasta scared the ever loving crap out of me, and it has a youtube video to go with it. It's one of the most common stories so you may have even read it on a different website. If not, when you finish the story, search the story name on youtube and watch the video clip. I have real issues watching it. The story is written as if it was lifted from a discussion forum.

Candle Cove

This was one of my first creepy pastas too! I loved it! I did not see the end coming at all.

I'm still uncertain whether this show really existed or not. I did see people post on some youtube videos that they have seen it, are they s***** Us or are they for real? This is a very deep rabbit hole.

Well after I read this pasta I googled candle cove and couldn't find much about whether or not it was a real show. Just that people remember it and nobody knows if it was actually aired or not. But I asked my mom who was a kid in the early 70's and she told me she remembered the show and especially the character with the handlebar mustache. So I have no idea what the deal is.

Originally posted by ucantcme

Originally posted by ldyserenity

Originally posted by ucantcme

Originally posted by tport17
Love me some creepy pasta.

My first creepy pasta scared the ever loving crap out of me, and it has a youtube video to go with it. It's one of the most common stories so you may have even read it on a different website. If not, when you finish the story, search the story name on youtube and watch the video clip. I have real issues watching it. The story is written as if it was lifted from a discussion forum.

Candle Cove

This was one of my first creepy pastas too! I loved it! I did not see the end coming at all.

I'm still uncertain whether this show really existed or not. I did see people post on some youtube videos that they have seen it, are they s***** Us or are they for real? This is a very deep rabbit hole.

Well after I read this pasta I googled candle cove and couldn't find much about whether or not it was a real show. Just that people remember it and nobody knows if it was actually aired or not. But I asked my mom who was a kid in the early 70's and she told me she remembered the show and especially the character with the handlebar mustache. So I have no idea what the deal is.

As I have noted above already--Candle Cove is not real--it's made up.I will be 47 next month and no such show existed.The last line of the story is about a boy watching 30 minutes of static--that's the twist and the giveaway that it's not real.However--it is one of the best pastas out there and the youtube videos are creepy as heck,too.

Here is a link to a really short but great creepypasta and link to youtube video,as well.

The Woman in the Oven

The Woman in the Oven

Originally posted by amrith777

Originally posted by ucantcme

Originally posted by ldyserenity

Originally posted by ucantcme

Originally posted by tport17
Love me some creepy pasta.

My first creepy pasta scared the ever loving crap out of me, and it has a youtube video to go with it. It's one of the most common stories so you may have even read it on a different website. If not, when you finish the story, search the story name on youtube and watch the video clip. I have real issues watching it. The story is written as if it was lifted from a discussion forum.

Candle Cove

This was one of my first creepy pastas too! I loved it! I did not see the end coming at all.

I'm still uncertain whether this show really existed or not. I did see people post on some youtube videos that they have seen it, are they s***** Us or are they for real? This is a very deep rabbit hole.

Well after I read this pasta I googled candle cove and couldn't find much about whether or not it was a real show. Just that people remember it and nobody knows if it was actually aired or not. But I asked my mom who was a kid in the early 70's and she told me she remembered the show and especially the character with the handlebar mustache. So I have no idea what the deal is.

As I have noted above already--Candle Cove is not real--it's made up.I will be 47 next month and no such show existed.The last line of the story is about a boy watching 30 minutes of static--that's the twist and the giveaway that it's not real.However--it is one of the best pastas out there and the youtube videos are creepy as heck,too.

Here is a link to a really short but great creepypasta and link to youtube video,as well.

The Woman in the Oven

The Woman in the Oven

Yeah I've read that one. It's even more creepy because I live in Minnesota In a quiet town near Minneapolis in fact.

It's also a little creepy that you chose to post that one in a reply to me for the reason stated above.

Originally posted by ucantcme

Originally posted by amrith777

Originally posted by ucantcme

Originally posted by ldyserenity

Originally posted by ucantcme

Originally posted by tport17
Love me some creepy pasta.

My first creepy pasta scared the ever loving crap out of me, and it has a youtube video to go with it. It's one of the most common stories so you may have even read it on a different website. If not, when you finish the story, search the story name on youtube and watch the video clip. I have real issues watching it. The story is written as if it was lifted from a discussion forum.

Candle Cove

This was one of my first creepy pastas too! I loved it! I did not see the end coming at all.

I'm still uncertain whether this show really existed or not. I did see people post on some youtube videos that they have seen it, are they s***** Us or are they for real? This is a very deep rabbit hole.

Well after I read this pasta I googled candle cove and couldn't find much about whether or not it was a real show. Just that people remember it and nobody knows if it was actually aired or not. But I asked my mom who was a kid in the early 70's and she told me she remembered the show and especially the character with the handlebar mustache. So I have no idea what the deal is.

As I have noted above already--Candle Cove is not real--it's made up.I will be 47 next month and no such show existed.The last line of the story is about a boy watching 30 minutes of static--that's the twist and the giveaway that it's not real.However--it is one of the best pastas out there and the youtube videos are creepy as heck,too.

Here is a link to a really short but great creepypasta and link to youtube video,as well.

The Woman in the Oven

The Woman in the Oven

Yeah I've read that one. It's even more creepy because I live in Minnesota In a quiet town near Minneapolis in fact.

It's also a little creepy that you chose to post that one in a reply to me for the reason stated above.

Oh noes! I assure you it was just a coincidence...but that IS creepy.Have you read the one about "The Rake"?Another classic one....

reply to post by amrith777


Okay just read it and yeah that was creepy. I'll have to look for a really creepy one tomorrow...when it's light out lol anymore creepy pasta tonight and I wont be sleeping

reply to post by amrith777


Just read The Rake. That's a pretty good one! For some reason that story reminds me of an experience I've posted about before. www.abovetopsecret.com...

reply to post by amongus


troll away then. You do understand what the guy was stating was a classic belief of how stories sometimes hold a truth to the. Though it's normally psychological stories can tell a lot of a person. And for the record, this is someone who has been a member for three years talking to you, not one, so don't try that one year proof or troll out .

Who the heck needs some made up cereepy like Candle Cove when there is this crap out there?


Now that is a scary kid's show!!!! Maybe not quite as dark.

reply to post by ldyserenity


That is a favorite as well. I've even had the chance to see it on television once. Creepy, but interesting at the same time.

Originally posted by tport17
reply to post by ldyserenity

 

That is a favorite as well. I've even had the chance to see it on television once. Creepy, but interesting at the same time.

It's creepy on two levels, first the satan thing and then if you look deeper into illuminate and stuff and understand the implications of Satan being the creator (along with the kids who were there and Mark Twain) It kind of looks like a revealing of the truths that the illuminate hold secret (they actually beleive lucifer is the creator and owner of Earth) Lucifer means morning star or something and it can be our sun or even Venus (but for this short film I would assume our sun) AND Satan was God's first SON (sun) Maybe the world GOD created is totally seperate from Earth, but then again they would still have to have a "Morning star" Wouldn't they they'd still need a sun...but the fact hell is fiery and full of sulphur and stuff is a pretty good description of the sun right? It is regardless spooky on several levels.

At work, didn't have time to read every page here...just the VERY disturbing Expressionless story.


So...for my own sanity and mental well-being, someone please reassure me that these are just fiction, and things like that didn't really happen. O.O