Shortest horror story ever! Seriously!

Originally posted by Serizawa
What about the babies and infants, I'm sure they were not working?

The factory had on-site day care.

Originally posted by ScorpioRising
Dammit I haven't got time to read the whole thread, wish I'd seen it earlier! Saved so I can come back, this is awesome!

Right I'm off, back later.


Unless there's a fire and my teeth explode into my head and I die.

I don't think that'll happen, this is a retro-futuristic tale.

Originally posted by kid_cudi
reply to post by abecedarian

 

That explains alot but what about the nephilims laser shooting teeth? He could have been in the factory all along? Oh oh oh. He was hiding in the bathroom stall no one used and the. Finally had enough of the smell and blew the factory and everybodies teeth up

Well, that breaks from my idea that it was alien technology being manufactured in the factory and lacsidasical government standards caused the machinations being built to cause the factory to blow/

Hey.. Hey... No, no, no. Death is not scarry. Death is, among sad, BORING. Make them Zombies.

7 pages of replies really....

Really ATS....

Originally posted by AboveTheTrees


... Make them Zombies.

That is covered in the prequel with extended plot.

Originally posted by RandalFlagg
7 pages of replies really....

Really ATS....

Thanks for your contribution to the thread.

Originally posted by RandalFlagg
7 pages of replies really....

Really ATS....

Don't! You'll be accused of being a buzzkill.

I guess there's not enough going on in the world.

Originally posted by scojak

Originally posted by kid_cudi
reply to post by dude69

 

All the teeth are awakened and form a teeth monster that eats the archaeologist

But along comes the tooth fairy and vanquishes the beast.

But then after the tooth fairy has evacuated its bowels from such an awesome meal of tooth monster, the teeth are fertilised, establish roots and grow into gnarled, twisted, knotty trees of deathly dark wood.. These trees eventually bare fruit... fruit that is in the form of zombie tooth monsters, ripely rotten and reeking of halitosis, they begin to devour anything and everything they can get their enamel on.

And the really funny part is that you probably thought about your story twice as long as most hollywood horror writers think about theirs. I like the part where the teeth explode.

Was the factory in USA ? We could call the movie "Teethless in Seattle"

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And thank you for the contribution Mr. Buzzkill

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Actually the really funny part is that I'm twisted and i thought if this in like 2 seconds.

Good story, although it lacks conflict...

reply to post by kid_cudi

Actually the really funny part is that I'm twisted and i thought if this in like 2 seconds.

That's twisted .

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7 pages of replies really....

Really ATS....

C'mon , tell the truth , you read all 7 pages too , now didn't you ?

Originally posted by kid_cudi
reply to post by ReRun

 

Hahaha that's was hilarious but what happened to Arnold? The man who fixed the machines when they brokedown.

Arnold kept saying "Quick, get to the chopper" but he didn't mean a helicopter, he meant a vivisection machine which he had just built out of automatic pencil sharpeners and other office supplies.

The man that accidentally cut the gas line actually did it on purpose. He was a shape shifting reptilian from the planet kharcasha. Hell bent on killing all humans in a secret surprise attack

Originally posted by don rumsfeld
That leaves it open for a sequel.

"Teeth of the Damned."

...but they didn't die, they turned into zombies.

Originally posted by nerbot

Originally posted by don rumsfeld
That leaves it open for a sequel.

"Teeth of the Damned."

...but they didn't die, they turned into zombies.

... reptillian Zombies who wanted to destroy humanity before we found out that reptillians taste like chicken.