Your Daily Haiku, page 19

posted on Sep, 25 2009 @ 07:36 PM

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While you were sleeping
You watched me drown...you just watched
Woke wearing a frown

While I was dreaming
I watched you love me...just watched
Woke gasping for air

[edit on 25-9-2009 by Excitable_Boy]

argentus

posted on Sep, 25 2009 @ 09:07 PM

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Wish I could give [you]
More than just one paltry star
Your words do touch me

edit for balance
I sometimes miscount, my bad
silly old reptile

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Spiramirabilis

posted on Sep, 26 2009 @ 12:04 AM

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reply to post by argentus

:-)

thank you argentus

and the same to you

I love this thread

I love people's thoughts - and words

Excitable_Boy

posted on Sep, 26 2009 @ 10:15 AM

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You killed that good man
I watched from the cathedral
The bell was ringing

Excitable_Boy

posted on Sep, 26 2009 @ 01:24 PM

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Take my time and take
My life...all life is just time
It's irrelevant

Excitable_Boy

posted on Sep, 26 2009 @ 03:04 PM

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She walked to the bridge
I looked away...kept fishing
She died on a rock

Spiramirabilis

posted on Sep, 27 2009 @ 10:15 AM

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vision waits on sight
in day only never night
darker truths find voice

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Excitable_Boy

posted on Sep, 27 2009 @ 10:36 AM

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I saw you today
You took my time and my life
I see no longer

Excitable_Boy

posted on Sep, 27 2009 @ 10:38 AM

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Something deep inside
Grabs me and it won't let go
Won't let me kill me

Excitable_Boy

posted on Sep, 27 2009 @ 10:58 AM

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In my hour of need
I sit and bleed out alone
Mother is that you ?

Excitable_Boy

posted on Sep, 27 2009 @ 11:01 AM

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Finally we meet
What took you so long...how long
To make yourself known

Excitable_Boy

posted on Sep, 27 2009 @ 11:02 AM

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Mockingbirds don't sing
When they fly around death's door
When you are no more

Excitable_Boy

posted on Sep, 27 2009 @ 11:06 AM

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No mercy...no rest for
The wicked...sick...sickly
They should go quickly

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Excitable_Boy

posted on Sep, 27 2009 @ 11:08 AM

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Good evening ladies
Gentlemen...behave yourselves
Let the games begin

Excitable_Boy

posted on Sep, 27 2009 @ 11:12 AM

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My belief proves what ?
I will play you forever
So play me again

Excitable_Boy

posted on Sep, 27 2009 @ 11:14 AM

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I might be crying
Don't know...but how would you know ?
I might be dying

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Excitable_Boy

posted on Sep, 27 2009 @ 11:16 AM

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You been gone so long
Grass has grown under my feet
Who the hell are you ?

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Spiramirabilis

posted on Sep, 27 2009 @ 12:56 PM

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oh Excitable boy

you are making my head hurt today

my heart too - but it's all good

seriously - it's all good

Spiramirabilis

posted on Sep, 27 2009 @ 12:57 PM

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tomb of thought opens
stays death from entry all song
sing my own mind home

[edit on 9/27/2009 by Spiramirabilis]

Excitable_Boy

posted on Sep, 28 2009 @ 07:16 PM

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The sun was jealous
Of the rainbow...even though
The sun created

Mother was jealous
Of the son...similarly
Son worshipped mother

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