Your Daily Haiku

reply to post by Excitable_Boy

There it is again...a blatant error in the Haiku. 6 syllables on the past line.

What the hell, were all friends here!

bumblingly old short
mottled apes discover, loose
serpent destroys lust

reply to post by Excitable_Boy

There it is again...a blatant error in the Haiku. 6 syllables on the past line.

maybe we should mess with the rules some - just for grins

what happens - the universe implodes?

probably not...

13/4/7...?

i have some catching up to do - haven't been reading even - for days...

(sorry)

reply to post by Excitable_Boy

Probly coyote

also - depending on who you are and where you're from - coyote can be just 2 syllables

:-)

Originally posted by Spiramirabilis
reply to post by Excitable_Boy

 

Probly coyote

also - depending on who you are and where you're from - coyote can be just 2 syllables

:-)

Yep, around Lubbock they callem Kai Yots, long o



obscenely bragging
compassionate sailor looks
buoyantly heart throb

[edit on 8-8-2009 by whaaa]

The summer rain beads
drops chasing each other
building to a faster finish

I am
This is
You are
I love you

Cheese and cracker crumbs
In bed between us like bugs
That's a Ritz cracker

Blood and bone and brain
Splattered across the highway
Better hose it down

reply to post by Praxilla


beautiful. Your haiku really touched me.

Lear makes me crazy
holograms, my bleedin' adz
just say "no" to drugs


edit: I'm beggin' all of your forgiveness. My style of writing haiku is to write in the moment, exactly what I am feeling that precise second. It isn't always savory. I suppose we all do this, without needing to justify it. My bad.

[edit on 12/8/09 by argentus]

reply to post by whaaa


Where I grew up, north eastern Idaho, near the Lakota nation, it was pronouced cay-o-TEH', or cay-O'-Tee.

po' lil' coyote
always has to steal his lunch
rabbits run too fast

Respect never gained
Night slinking, unfeared, recoiled
It's a hard-knock life

[edit on 12/8/09 by argentus]

oh whaaa - I would never mess with the Haiku :-)

they had it worked out long ago...

long wait on Night’s bed
dark arms hold soft gossip said
nape draped in blue din

horseflies float slowly
craftily, panda rains, dark
poetess fleeting

turns once Summer’s face
finds place in falling silver
light escapes Fall’s eyes

early days allow
wilding skeins fast flying sing
quicken trumpets south

kingdoms scratch flustered
fisherwomen squeaking still
wintertime reddens

waters wander long
greening scents on singing stone
caravan whispers

[edit on 8/26/2009 by Spiramirabilis]

My ass is itchy
I must not have wiped too well
I need a bidet




[edit on 26-8-2009 by Excitable_Boy]

reply to post by Excitable_Boy


EB is back!

reply to post by Excitable_Boy


don't know how I did that - twice

but it is nice to see you're back

[edit on 8/26/2009 by Spiramirabilis]