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I want justice..
originally posted by: Astyanax
a reply to: BrotherKinsMan
I want justice..
You could use a bit more plot in your story too. Speaking as a professional editor, I'd say lose the amnesia. It's an obstacle in plotting terms.
How do you know anything abduction wise even happened if you can't remember a thing , other than standing by a window? Maybe it's really a memory being surpressed of something earthly that happened to you instead?
originally posted by: BrotherKinsMan
I don't even remember moving into the house.
My very first memory is of me just standing there by the window.
That ain't normal...
And I had to live with this my whole life.
I lived in fear every night for many years.
With no one to talk to. Not even sure I would've had the courage to really talk about it anyway.
And then what? I can't remember! What is there to talk about!?
The fear turned to anger over the years.
It's now boiled into rage.
Whatever happened to me, it wasn't right.
You have no right to take someone's memories.
They're gone.
To me, it's like they were never there in the first place.
I want justice...
originally posted by: ScarletDarkness
How do you know anything abduction wise even happened if you can't remember a thing , other than standing by a window? Maybe it's really a memory being surpressed of something earthly that happened to you instead?