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originally posted by: LucidWarrior
a reply to: ZapBrannigan3030
Uh huh. Cool story bro. What is your point?
originally posted by: LucidWarrior
a reply to: ZapBrannigan3030
It is not my fault if you can't read, I literally spelled it out.
So, with that, I'm sure it was brilliant and that I'm just being overly realistic in my expectations.
originally posted by: LucidWarrior
a reply to: ZapBrannigan3030
Well thanks for being honest. Ya coulda started with that, ya know now, were talking haha. You're completely right- it IS nothing haha(NOW I'm being cryptic LOL).
Wordy, I might be, but if so I had to be. There is no easy way to translate the larger truths, because there is so much background that if our try and include it all, the human mind cannot wrap around it.
So what do you do? You have to tell a story, because with interaction and dialogue you can represent things which otherwise would just be hidden in TRUE jabberjaw fashion. And that is exactly what this IS, is a story, told from the first person.
It is true that the story still lacks reference. So I can see where it could easily be termed cryptic. But there's not much I can do about that unfortunately.
However, shallow?
While I would be quick to deny such a claim, I'm actually curious. Why do you perceive this prophecy as shallow?
So, with that, I'm sure it was brilliant and that I'm just being overly realistic in my expectations.
originally posted by: LucidWarrior
Only if you are corruption or corrupted.
originally posted by: Krahzeef_Ukhar
Fair enough.
Any tips for the corruption or corrupted?