Short ambient song - 'The Temptation of Jesus' - Christians please tell me what you think!

Okay my dudes, just gonna hijack my own thread and commit some sacriledge... forgive me... but atleast this is 'parody' music.

This is a classic tune I made about this walking-talking character ringing Satan's doorbell and complaining, asking where Satan is, Satan comes to the door and the character is like "It's a miracle!" (this is a joke, get it? lol) and then Satan has a verse where he does some melodic huffing and puffing, then they fight. The song repeats again but some stuff is added (spooky!). It was made on naughty person drugs that only adults can use.

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originally posted by: throwaway115

originally posted by: burgerbuddy

originally posted by: throwaway115
I am NOT religious.

This is a short ambient and atmospheric composition, the chords used are meant to express Jesus's point of view when faced with temptation.

If it offends you, please let me know, and if it strikes a CHORD with you, I would be honoured, as this is not a subject I have touched on before. I normally make waaaay different stuff.

Thanks.

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I liked it it's emotive effect.

Free form expression.

BUT!

You have know Jesus doesn't work with peanut butter and cotton candy against his enemies.

So kinda fail there. But you are not religious.

A rather pleasant clip but no way what you think it would be.

Think about it.

This portrays Him as a "no prob" everything is smooth.

I don't hear the temptation and struggle of Christ. No dynamics, musically.

Hell, it's like my decision of sushi or noodles. That's not temptation.

But what do I know,, I'm just a cook.

Here is mine.

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ERR MERR GERD... I wasn't expecting this. Someone to #ing bounce off. Thank-you dude.

Your layering in that track took me to an alternate reality. You seem like quite the psychonaut? Thanks for the inspiration my man.

Ummm, but. In relation to Christ? This is him having some very seedy issues that I find difficult to put into words. And I say seedy only because of Christ's typically portrayed character trying to find a niche in this music. He would be acting... quite odd.

I don't think this is Jesus music my dude. Do you want to hear some of my Satan stuff? haha.

Sure!

Isn't satan part of religion?

More like yin to Jesus's Yan?

You got head phones?

Besides, your temptation of Christ fell short.

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What i got from your clip was not very reflective of the struggle.

I said I liked it. Man after my own heart with the angels.

Blue angels,

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Here is a tun for everyone.

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Rip me apart on any of of it.

a reply to: burgerbuddy

Wow. loved One point 5 c the hard way.

Liked and reposted.

I prefer to play guitar. But, use DAW to prod digital music. It's hard to do rock music with a synth.

Here's a couple of attempts.

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a reply to: throwaway115

The different parts sounded kind of incongruous to me. Maybe make it into 2 or more songs. Don't think I'll buy the album.

a reply to: toms54

No worries.

Did you listen to any of the other tracks?

Edit: Also worth mention that this was made when I had a special um..... well... the winds of magic were blowing heavy that weekend. I won't write again like this for a long time... I don't know how it happened dude haha. I was under ALOT of pressure. The good kind.

Edit2: My apologies, it's from this album, I removed the link earlier: ropalone.bandcamp.com...

originally posted by: blackcrowe
a reply to: burgerbuddy

Wow. loved One point 5 c the hard way.

Liked and reposted.

I prefer to play guitar. But, use DAW to prod digital music. It's hard to do rock music with a synth.

Here's a couple of attempts.

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Way cool synths! wish I could do that!

I like both!

I likened it to a mix between URIAH HEEP and maybe the soupdragons....or the Heartless Bastards, chick singer

a reply to: burgerbuddy

Thanks.

I'll be listening to more of yours when i get time.

a reply to: throwaway115

I guess you're not a big fan of Mozart?
Sorry about that, I was hoping you'd get the reference
I actually dig experimental type music & my real opinion is that you make interesting music, definitely not too many notes.
If anything it's got too *few* notes. I had to listen to it several times to make up for that.

Keep up the good work ma'am, i look forward to hearing more from you.