Some Electro Funk with a feel of roboticky/alieny and a touch of groove

The Rush - Alex Famous

My newest song! Hope you guys enjoy it.

Lyrics:

Driving at the dead of night
My eyes are slowly closing tight
And I drift into a highway of unknown

My thoughts are flying out the window
Pixelated like Nintendo
These games my mind plays when I am alone

Oh, I just caught myself lost inside a trance
And all the headlights seem to want to dance
My hands slide off the wheel, is any of this real

I just want to feel...the rush
I just want to feel...the rush
I just want to feel...the rush
Yeah, I just want to feel...the rush

We keep on driving, keep on driving, keep on driving, keep on driving
Keep on driving,it's like we're flying

We keep on driving, keep on driving, keep on driving, keep on driving
Keep on driving, it's like we're flying

Press my feet onto the pedal
Peaceful whirring of the metal
Spinning wheels are hypnotizing me

I let my body take me over
Unconscious as I'm slipping under
Into a dream world falling half asleep

Oh, I just caught myself lost inside a trance
And all the headlights seem to want to dance
My hand slides off the wheel, is any of this real

I just want to feel...the rush
I just want to feel...the rush
I just want to feel...the rush
Yeah, I just want to feel...the rush

I just want to feel...the rush
I just want to feel...the rush
I just want to feel...the rush
Yeah, I just want to feel...the rush

Ptenjakin
The Rush - Alex Famous

My newest song! Hope you guys enjoy it.

Lyrics:

Driving at the dead of night
My eyes are slowly closing tight
And I drift into a highway of unknown

My thoughts are flying out the window
Pixelated like Nintendo
These games my mind plays when I am alone

Oh, I just caught myself lost inside a trance
And all the headlights seem to want to dance
My hands slide off the wheel, is any of this real

I just want to feel...the rush
I just want to feel...the rush
I just want to feel...the rush
Yeah, I just want to feel...the rush

We keep on driving, keep on driving, keep on driving, keep on driving
Keep on driving,it's like we're flying

We keep on driving, keep on driving, keep on driving, keep on driving
Keep on driving, it's like we're flying

Press my feet onto the pedal
Peaceful whirring of the metal
Spinning wheels are hypnotizing me

I let my body take me over
Unconscious as I'm slipping under
Into a dream world falling half asleep

Oh, I just caught myself lost inside a trance
And all the headlights seem to want to dance
My hand slides off the wheel, is any of this real

I just want to feel...the rush
I just want to feel...the rush
I just want to feel...the rush
Yeah, I just want to feel...the rush

I just want to feel...the rush
I just want to feel...the rush
I just want to feel...the rush
Yeah, I just want to feel...the rush

honestly...the mix is impressive, EQ is good, levels are balanced, everything is clear and mixed and mastered well, which all of that is a feat unto itself. The music itself, reminds me of Daft Punk's newest album, Random Access Memories, which is a massively funk/groove influenced electronic hybrid album. I'm a metal fan though so I wasn't really that into the style, but it was a well performed song and your voice sounds good. I would advise letting yourself flow a little bit more instead of trying to force lyrics that you wrote, maybe try to listen to the music first and loop it and freestyle until you come up with something that just feels good. Instead of making it work for you, you work for it. That's my constructive criticism, good job though for reals.

reply to post by ZadZacZadlin


Thanks for the feedback! That's actually what I do when I write lyrics and music. Guess it didn't come out as I wanted to portray. But I appreciate all the comments.

I've been teaching myself to mix/master etc. I'm glad it's starting to sound a lot cleaner!

Love it!
i cant help wondering where i heard the first 3 lines before...
or maybe it just sounds similar to something ive heard.
But that is a very well executed song.
Brilliant work there