reply to post by Ptenjakin
I'll take a listen - I have a ton of respect for musicians. I'll edit this post to let you know what I think.
Edit:
Track 1 - Nice voice, great emotion conveyed. It's catchy, the first song at least, some of parts sounds amateur though. Around 2 mins in the first
song, I think if you went for deep bass/dub step-type feel it would work great. Your voice has the emotion, but the music, IMHO, seems to have lost
the emotion there.
Track 2 - Love the opening. Voice is spot on (damn you're really good). Great lyrics, smart, catchy. Sweet transition to the drums. -- have you
shopped this around? You may have hit here. A producer would get you better production equipment (of course) and maybe a slight rearrange of song, but
that's a hit song. Wow.
Track 3 - I like the timing of the opening - better production of this song could make it "pop." It's dying for the production value a song like Nicki
Minaj "Startships" has. This is really good too.
Do you have an AR? If not, DM me. I don't have time to listen to more, but you're really good, original and got talent.
Edit to add: I'm not an AR, but I have friends.
OK, I kept listening. I lived with a now well-known AR while in college with known rappers coming in and out of our apartment in NYC and visited the
studios nearly every night for 3 years - for the heck of it I helped listen critically to tracks on some known radio songs and made suggestions.
Anyway my point is, you're really darn good. The whole package from your name to look and the actual music.
Track 4 - Are you harnessing Adele (soul) with a mix of Savage Garden. It's good. Vocals again are spot on as are lyrics.
Track 5 - Party song. Definitively catchy, awesome lyrics for a paying audience. I can see this on the radio. The FT is solid too. This might be my
favorite so far, it's emotional and can dance to it.
Track 6 - Another soul piece with piano - touching lyrics.
OK, I really have to leave. Anyways -- you're on the right track. It's an amazing first album. Congratulations - I hope you go far!
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