Tinder [CTPWC]

Someone has to know

Which way the river flows

Oh, how far does it go

My burning bridges glow

To walk in between

The ultimate unseens

And life what does it mean

Between the might-have-beens

And miles Around, come crashing to the ground

Whose future abounds, so the lost can be found

And if I look away, my eyes will betray

This voice with no sound, the silence so loud

Time and Tides to cry

To Breathe with a sigh

That all my thoughts tonight

Burning in the light

Destiny to claim

Honesty through shame

Honestly I say

Walking through the flames

And miles Around, come crashing to the ground

Whose future abounds, so the lost can be found

And if I look away, my eyes will betray

This voice with no sound, the silence so loud

For G

reply to post by sonnny1


You know, I am just blown away by the calibre of writing that this contest is bringing out!

SnF, my friend. Well done!

reply to post by beezzer


Thank You Beez.



Poetry is my favorite type of writing.

I might just add the voice to it, and put it up on Youtube. You might be surprised.

reply to post by sonnny1


Oh hell yes! Link it if you do!

reply to post by sonnny1


Lovely,
why are there
tears
on my cheek?

Enjoyed it very much. I can relate. Let us know abut the youtube deal.

reply to post by MsAphrodite


Thank You very much, for the kind words.

Originally posted by Iamschist
Enjoyed it very much. I can relate. Let us know abut the youtube deal.

Thank You........



I just have to get the time to record it. Maybe this weekend........

I have to agree with everyone so far. Nicely done my friend

Very nice...

i have to agree with all previous comments... this is fantastic

i never realized how many poets frequented ATS....

reply to post by SLAYER69


Thank you Brother.

Appreciate the kind words.

Originally posted by Ph03n1x
Very nice...

i have to agree with all previous comments... this is fantastic

i never realized how many poets frequented ATS....

Why, Thank You.

You have the gift also..............

reply to post by sonnny1

And miles Around, come crashing to the ground Whose future abounds, so the lost can be found

Beautiful work there Sonny1! that line really hooked me in.. And I can feel this way written with much heart and much emotion. It comes through deeply in your work here! SnF from me on this work!
One of your best submissions yet !

reply to post by zysin5


Thank You very much.

You are too kind.

Wonderful submission sonnny1 i enjoyed the read ..peace,sugarcookie1 S&F

reply to post by sugarcookie1


Thank You sugarcookie................


I do appreciate it.

reply to post by sonnny1


That was a beautiful walk through your words. S&F

What is [ctpwc] ?

reply to post by Egyptia


I appreciate the kind words, Thank You.

Originally posted by nakiel
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Cold Tracks Poetry Writing Contest [CTPWC]