In the eye of the sun

I see you all ways
but you can see me only
in the eye of the sun.
back in the place where
it all begun.
Beyond that first song.
The original hum.
In my love for you
before you had gone.
I attached a silken thread.
Invisible and unyielding.
For the day when you tire.
It's there, for however long
to guide you safely, surely
a return to our home.
To the eye of the sun
back in the place where it all begun.
To you who are,
I say that without you
I am surely no one.
I have seen my self weak
like a fallen tree
abandoned with no hope,
no seeds.
I recall my past deeds.
Like Empty boots caught in
the deserts of tumbling weeds.
It is only now that I have finally
heard your song.
Echoing from the eye in the sun
back in the place where it all begun.
That I am able to return,
Home
our place,
our country,
our one.

Eliberocelta Mel- 19.10.2012

reply to post by ancientthunder


interesting collection of words. Is this a poem of love for returning to origin or is this praise or words for an individual?

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Beautiful!

The suns gotta be doing something to everything I can feel it... Like I lost a couple nuts and bolts and my head aint on straight... And people are just fricken wonky the last month even me!

reply to post by AthlonSavage
Its in honor of our source.

Beautiful and deeply touching
Thanks for sharing

Interesting how poetry expresses what we feel better than prose these days. Ticks the boxes this one. Thank you for writing it.

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Beautiful.
Thank you for sharing.

This song came to mind when reading the OP:
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