I wrote a children's book: Can I read it to you?, page 1

posted on Oct, 10 2012 @ 03:17 PM

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What's up ATS.
need a short distraction from conspiracy theories?

So with the 5 minutes of my life that I wasn't trolling around this website looking for a good conspiracy, I wrote a children's book called Dream Detectives: Something Funny About the Cake.
Watch the video.
I think you'll like it.

Thanks for watching!!!!!

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NarcolepticBuddha

posted on Oct, 11 2012 @ 03:28 AM

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Hey, not bad at all. Thanks for sharing this with us. It is a lot harder to write for children than one might think. I have taken plenty of creative writing classes and children's literature was one of the toughest for me!

I ask one question when scrutinizing a children's book. Does it show wonderment and imagination? You have passed my scrutiny! Dreams detectives is a neat idea for children, definitely!

I have written a couple of children's books as well. One for more like beginning reader/ picture. And one for a bit older audience, but haven't decided which age group to direct it toward. It could go in many directions. I haven't submitted any for publication though.

Keep on writing

FreedomEntered

posted on Jan, 25 2013 @ 04:29 PM

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Nice, what age range?

HomerinNC

posted on Jan, 25 2013 @ 04:43 PM

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If someone's gonna say it, might as well be me:

THE CAKE IS A LIE!!!

Very cute story, S&F