A new song (Beat Poetry) I made - Looking for feedback

Not trying to be the best - Just doing the best I can / trying to get better - *Which*cough late edit *With* each song I make, I try to get a little feed back and incorporate it into the next :

Comment/Like/Subscribe

Any support is awesome - even if you say it sucks and should quit music, that's your opinion and it's valued

Would rather bump this thread up then make a new one -

Waste of thread-space + it's been over 24 hours.

Any feed back would be wonderful.
Thank you

Just came across this gem sounds really professional - did you mix / master it yourself or did you get the recording done professionally?

Also wondering if you created the backing music from scratch or is it a composition from pre-made samples?

Pretty awesome either way

Thank you very much!

I'd really like to continue making music... so I am pushing word out as much as I can.

I know I'm not the best. I'm not trying to be the best... I'm only doing the best I can...

and always trying to improve...

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Not gonna try to make a new thread - Would rather recycle the old thread!