Here is MY song, 100 Bars of Wisdom.......

Let me know what yall think. I hope yall like it! Thank you ahead of time.
www.reverbnation.com...

Good work super!
Breathin was really cool with how you roll between rapping and melodic vocal lines. That's a really sweet formula.
Lyrics and vocals are well done and I think you probably did really well using the equipment at hand to make your recording. It deserves a little higher quality IMO, but I don't mean that as a criticism at all.
You should be proud of this, I'm not a rap fan but this is well done. Keep on rocking in the free world

Very impressive! More my daughters style of music. Will make sure she listens!


My daughter loves it! She said you keep this up... you will go places.

Thank you all very much. I work hard on this everyday. I appreciate the feedback. See, not all rap is bad. lol