tried the 3 word story? well heres the 4 word poem

ive had fun doing the 3 word story...
i wrote a poem a while back which only had 4 words, so lets give it a try here on ATS.
unlike the 3 word story, each poem is a one-off. as in the next post does'nt relate to the previous one.
every post is a poem in its own right.
so here goes...

here
there
everywhere
hair

reply to post by SecretKnowledge

here there everywhere hair

good grief ...thats a line from the musical hair...

if you think ripping off lines from musicals is original poetry...you don't fool the rest of us...thats really lame.

lol

snapped

Originally posted by krave
lol

snapped

oh yeah....snap.......i managed to write a complete song, produce market it and make millions all in the space of several seconds, here is my video clip, not sure if you think it could sell and make a descent profit.





obviously kidding right...snap snap snip snip

Originally posted by gabby2011
reply to post by SecretKnowledge

 

here there everywhere hair

good grief

...thats a line from the musical hair...

wow
ive never seen any musical in my life let alone hair
it was just something i wrote a while back thats all
my girlfriends hair is all over the apartment, is all
ah well there goes this thread down the pan
an honest coincidence

reply to post by SecretKnowledge



Rainbows
Heavens
Eternal
Promise

Originally posted by gabby2011
reply to post by SecretKnowledge

 

here there everywhere hair

good grief

...thats a line from the musical hair...

Yup, first thing that I seen also. Now I can't get that damn song out of my head!

Definitely from the Musical.

lol

lost
host
last
post

good
grief
lyric
thief

No
Beer
Total
Fear

coincidences
inexcusable
plagiarisms
forgiven

belly
jelly
telly
something-elly

My god that was harder than I thought it would be!

reply to post by rykc27


Home
Brewed
Plenty
Too

=]

really
lame
blame
game

reply to post by rykc27
total beer no fear

game
lame
shame
name

reply to post by SecretKnowledge

sorry..thought you knew it was words from a musical...i take back my shame comments..honest mistake I guess

Death
Destruction
Deservedly So

Run through the forest and wiggle our toes
Run for the hills, crimson moon did it show
Waters so high, can no longer hold my nose
Wont hold my breath, I knew soon it would be time to go
Sumerian thoughts, Time moves so slow
The innocent, the new, the truth they will show
Our history is hidden, The big bang theory? NO
So what now, all gone, will this planet now grow?
We once had our chance, but from this planet, we're thrown
No care, No thought, use the black gold below
Till the Mother cried out "You will all feel the woe"

TIME HAS COME.

barring
PROOF
no
starring