the neverending poem

okay think three word story here except, its a poem each person contributes 2 lines, those two lines have to rhyme whith eachother the second set also has to rhyme with eachoter but not with the first set etc.ill start.

perhaps i was in love with the darkside
something in my childhood that made my heart die.

Maybe I was a part of a system
And within my soul got no reply

just wait until the end of time
when i can fly

I can�t help these thoughts,
That filter through my mind.

even when i die
ill always be alive

Cruising through the universe
I'll rise above the mortal curse.

"You sold me your soul, when you didn't say no
Just let a nigga go, and give me what you owe"

give me freedom
i feel like im locked up on death row

your Apathy killed my soul,
Since you left me i never felt whole,

freemason needs to set a new goal
to stop being the boards biggest troll

just messin with you freemason you are one of ats's most intelligent members.

I can catch you in the very building that you live in
Wait until you get right at your door then start spittin

rounds from my mac 10
on the ground clutchin your stomach beggin for me to let you keep livin.

Go ahead and shoot you cretin goon
I'd rather die than take mercy from you.

retalliation is a must
if you want compensation.

my only fear of death is reincarnation, heart of a soldier
with the brain to teach a whole nation

I feel lost, like the almighty forgotten soldier,
still waiting for my eternal salvation,

[edit on 8-8-2004 by infinite]

But you don't hear me, ignorance is blisning and so on
Sometimes it's better to be taught dumb

Deep inside my broken soul i feel so numb,
Life has taken its toll and its hard to breathe

This is ridiculous.

A poem is not just a collection of words its something that comes from within to express a feeling or a situation. This is just word association. The very composition and choice of a single world can completely flip a poem and you seek to lump lines together to form a "neverending" poem when length means nothing.

A dark day for the fiction forum

no one ever asked you anyways,
why did you post here anyways?