A very short tale with a happy ending.

Ok, so I have always been very keen to write, especially knowing that I'm more or less talented in it, no matter which language I'm using... So, I decided to give it a try for writing the most superior tale of them all - something, that would make sure that I could find my place in the history of the human kind... Something epic, something that no-one else could ever make fun of!

So, here we go...

I) The beginning

Once upon a time there was a place, where they lived happily ever after.

The end.

Now, wasn't that something?! I mean, the structury of the whole story, as well as the writing style, was all the way consistent from the beginning to the end...

Wow. I did it.

The title says with a happy ending, so I thought you were going to tell us a tale about visiting a chinese massage parlore....

Oh well...

Good writing skills. I would love to be a writer but all my stories start with "It was a dark and stormy night" and I can't get past the first line. I have writers block

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lol that has to be one of the shortest story's i have ever read

Originally posted by Ufomies
Once upon a time there was a place, where they lived happily ever after.

The end.

How much more entertaining it would have been to:

1) Know the place through description. Was it a desert, forested or both? Was it temperate, cold or hot?

2) Was there a community and a structured social system? What would it look like in comparison to the ones we are familiar with?

3) Who are 'they'?

Personally speaking of course, but I'd suggest your story leaves more unanswered questions than characters in the sentence you've provided.

Not a fan...