(AFWC) Zazzbot: Going Rogue

Can I have the last 10 minutes of my life back Just kidding ...

"The internet wasn't created for mockery, it was supposed to help researchers at different universities share data sets." - HS



That said ... very nicely done zazz.

[edit on 1 Jan 2010 by schrodingers dog]

Great story, Zass...

Only one thing...

Where'm I? *pouting* I thought we were friends? *pouting*

J/K. More, more.

When is the part where I come in and save every ones butt?



seriously,I love it zazz. Hope you write more.

reply to post by zazzafrazz




OK is that an invitation?
I may just have to roll up my sleeves and jump in soon.

S & F

You have some intimate knowledge of some of the posters here. Impressive writing too.

Keep it up

reply to post by SLAYER69


Might be fun to do a collaborative. Slay, you would HAVE to have tons, and tons of authority. (You're that kind of guy). But one of your first acts would need be to take that beer away from OZ, and for God's sake, get those atomic wings out of S-Dog's possession. They are changing him.....into some kind of mutant. (Shame, Zazz, shame).

Oh--- the title alone merits a S&F! How very clever.

The Tenth Power is having a coffee with Angelina Jolie, they are comparing adopted babies, he thinks he's finally over taken her count with his Korea acquisition

Zazz...you owe me a new monitor...

I heart you like a room full of weight watchers look at pizza..

Muah!

~Keeper

reply to post by zazzafrazz


I was laughing so hard it was like watching Mutters, the new drama hour.

Now all you need is sound effects.

Then you can take it to ATS News as a new Conspiracom (Sit Com).

Michael Winslow - Tennis Game


[edit on 1-1-2010 by SpartanKingLeonidas]

The vegans killed me? WTF!?!?!?!

Loved the story, frazzle.....

-Dev

Thx Peeps, I agree with piddles, this story is crap! LOL

Anyhoo, If could be arsed to give another 30 mins of my life to a part 2, others like Serbsta, SKL, Seagull GEL and GST will make an appearance ofc...GST, we do need a replacent metrosexual Texan afterall

I apologise again profusly for this silly story, It was written in a New Year Day Severe hangover.....DTs and all.



[edit on 1-1-2010 by zazzafrazz]

Originally posted by zazzafrazz


"Blup Blup here and ready to kick some arse commander!"

"Blups, can you not dress in just a loin cloth when we do this, and take off those ridiculous angel wings, Gay Mardi Gras is in March

cheers Zazz


Cool story

[edit on 1/1/10 by blupblup]

Originally posted by zazzafrazz
Thx Peeps, I agree with piddles, this story is crap! LOL

Anyhoo, If could be arsed to give another 30 mins of my life to a part 2, others like Serbsta and GST will make an appearance ofc...GST, we do need a replacent metrosexual Texan afterall

I apologise again profulsy for this silly story, It was written in a New Year Day Severe hangover.....DTs and all.

So, basically you are saying that we need to send a round of drinks to you in order to get your creative juices flowing in order to produce us another work of art

Im sure something can be arranged

reply to post by greeneyedleo


PUI ing has always been my forte

Originally posted by zazzafrazz
Thx Peeps, I agree with piddles, this story is crap! LOL

GST will make an appearance ofc...GST, we do need a replacent metrosexual Texan afterall

You are so banned!

Kidding of course.

As long as I am the main character and the hero I am just fine.

BTW I love that the creative writing forum has a top threads bulletin at the moment...More writters pls join the fun!! Come and put me to shame!!! Though I shame myself daily, you can all finish the job.

[edit on 1-1-2010 by zazzafrazz]

Originally posted by zazzafrazz
Thx Peeps, I agree with piddles, this story is crap! LOL

Anyhoo, If could be arsed to give another 30 mins of my life to a part 2, others like Serbsta, SKL, Seagull GEL and GST will make an appearance ofc...GST, we do need a replacent metrosexual Texan afterall

I apologise again profusly for this silly story, It was written in a New Year Day Severe hangover.....DTs and all.



[edit on 1-1-2010 by zazzafrazz]

Now, zazzafrazzles, your story was awesome, and unique, and pulled a lot of ATS/BTS into it.

Do not let one negative person, someone who has no idea what goes on in Mutters, get you siding with them.

Lots of love babe, and Happy New Year, now start on part two.

~Hugz zazzafrazzles tight~

reply to post by SpartanKingLeonidas


No I am quite happy for constructive criticism, and indeed that was a fair call

Originally posted by SpartanKingLeonidas


~Hugz zazzafrazzles tight~

I hear hugging your zazzafrazzle is illegal in some parts of the world...

Wow, who said that? Not me!


I agree though, I want part 2! And part 3 and 4 as well!



[edit on 1-1-2010 by gimme_some_truth]

Originally posted by zazzafrazz
reply to post by SpartanKingLeonidas

 

No I am quite happy for constructive criticism, and indeed that was a fair call

Sweetheart, darl, lovely Aussie lady, there's a fine line between constructive criticism, and complete negativity.

Check out how many people have flagged and starred your thread, over one person poo-pooing it.

Really darl, I loved it, I do not spend enough time in the Short Stories forums.

Your story was top notch.

No arguing with me, I see your talent come out to play in these threads.

So does everyone else.

Besides, you're not on the ATS side enough, BTS has too much of you.

Love seeing you here, Short Stories, or otherwise.