2012 Poem

2012
we all have delve
into our imagination
to think of the end of creation
tried to prove others wrong
but still worried all along
if they were right
if we would simply die
in the night
we hoped it was a lie
but all the signs
are pointing to disasters
of every kind
nukes, aliens, the sun
polar shift, satan, it doesn't sound fun
were will you be
when it comes
when it is done?

This is the first poem i have written outside of an english class. Answer the question in poetry from, or you could just critizise me(not being sarcastic).

(edited to fix spelling)

[edit on 9-4-2009 by AntiConspirator]

Great job - Just use spell check unless you wanted those a few words misspelled like that.

Star for you!