musings for Feb

More from "My World"

I'm waiting for you
So come on, come out
where ever you are.
"Madre de Dios"
the cotton tails
The desert willow
the Datura
the Desert
the Bosque
A miniature sky
invents itself
behind me by
my pick up.
Hop in,
It's not far.

A Long One

It voids the apricot
and accidents of space
and sounds like a Gibson
first in the lot, Similar cars
listening mouth to mouth
hear it as desert time
and turn into the brain
as reflections on the maize.

filed in his likeness
like fabrication a son
and taps his life.
Like count Elmore.
When we behave too
simply toward some law
we have our image,
father from the sand
the sand form hiss
to foul our traces,
dragging us to death
behind disturbed machines.

She knows how far it is
between the speaker and the word
She has waited long enough
She walks with the early crowd
And hovers a few inches off the ground
clawing for a hand-hold in the air.

I have been sent here
to guide the psycho's
in their funny dance
wire and wood machines
moans, sings, weeps
The electric madness
extasy and sadness

She bends and
submits to the
drums, throb
pulse, Tribal
goddess, desert
priestess of neon
light and sound.

muchacha de
harmony y sweet
mulatto queen
You make our
nights vibrate
with poets praise
of the liquid sky.
gracias belleza.

Chili stains
Coma night trip
Bed bugs and bally-hoo

The great outdoors
Whores and
S'mores

Takes a licking
And keeps on ticking
Time bomb baloney sandwich

Extra cheese if you please
A tease me
Squeeze

Next up:

Bombshell Panty Raid

by EB

Bombshell Panty Raid

I'm having trouble with this one. I might remind everyone that this is a COLLABORATIVE forum. Feel free to take part in ANY thread.

What is a bombshell panty raid? Bombshell is slang for a beautiful woman generally with a great body. Though, the expression is a might old fashioned. Or a bomb shell can be a bomb shell. And it can explode, be dropped from a plane or shot from a ship, etc.

So...is it a panty raid during an attack? Or....is it a panty raid on a bunch of babes? I'm thinking the latter is the more fun....and likely. Would a group of men be grabbing women's unerwears during an attack? There might be one looney who decides it's a great idea, but not the lot of them.

Is Bombsell Panty Raid a book? a poem? a short story? or novella as it were....I think it could be a great novel. Why, a New York Times best seller. It also rings of a 1970's movie made for the drive-in. Lots of down time in the movie for....extracurricular activites (nudge nudge, wink wink). A great movie to take a young lady to if she is a "goer."





[edit on 1-10-2008 by Excitable_Boy]

reply to post by Excitable_Boy


LOL EB. As a woman who has been a victim of a Panty-Raid, once or twice, I will gladly give you any insight you need from the victims point of view for this masterpiece that will no doubt, sell a million and a half copies on its first day!

- Carrot

reply to post by CA_Orot


Thanks for the help Carrot. Now....in a panty raid, is there generally a plan on the part of the raider? Do they generally go after specific panties or is it a mad dash to grab anything?

Now...not to be gross, but do they generally target nice clean ones or are they usually digging through the dirty laundry? Understand, this is strictly for research for my "novel."

reply to post by Excitable_Boy


WELL...

I think sometimes, it is pre-meditated. Like there's a game plan they follow, full of strategy and suave movements, so that the victim doesnt even know the panties are missing until they go to find their favorite pair.

In personal experience, the snatched pair has been straight from the drawer, and mostly they are black in color. Which really bugs me, because the black ones are the best ones!

I have no idea what becomes of them, after the said abudction, and frankly I dont want to know their fate!

- Carrot