My Poetry. ~angel_crush~

Heres some of my poetry, I hope you enjoy it.

May the final fighter win

You told me I was strong
And that my days you’d always make brighter.
You told me sweetly that you loved me
And that you knew I was a Fighter.
I am wishing you the best of luck,
In the battle yet to begin
I know I am strong enough…and I hope that you are too.
So May the final fighter win.
This is the worst part in every non-lasting relationship.
The part where you have to force yourself to stay away.
This is most painful part…fighting the urge to call you,
And regretting what I never could say.
I will not ever give up...
I will not leave with you, everything I have gained
But I ended up leaving it with you,
It’s not to late…
Its never late enough
It’s not to late…
True love is never to late…
True love is never given up on.
I am wishing you the best of luck,
In the battle yet to begin
I know I am strong enough
So May the final fighter win.


The Truth

They’re all in denial
But the truth is right under they’re nose
The silent barbwire fencing
This shouldn’t be the way life goes.
When you think yesterday
Do you think of the way your makeup didn’t look right
When I think of yesterday
They think of all the ones we lost in the fight.
The screams that came from my best friend
When they dragged her with her tears away
As I hid in the corner. And prayed for the day it would end.
The poverty and the racism…
The guns and the lives wasted
The suffering and the killing...
The pain and having to face it.
The way they took my words away
Like a million shattered pieces of glass
Cutting through my lungs…
I’m dead.

more coming soon...

[edit on 21-6-2007 by angel_crush]

Some pretty powerful words, was it based on something true or false, I'll be here waitin' 'till I get my response.

haha. The first one is based on a true story from my life..
The second one is one I wrote for a school project about the Holocaust.

..I should post some of my more recent ones soon.

Believe it or not this girl has written over 100 poems.I keep telling her to put them in a book.Some are very dark but not all.

* Sweetie you know I think you are a wonderfully talented writer.Please post some more.

Originally posted by AccessDenied


* Sweetie you know I think you are a wonderfully talented writer.Please post some more.

You're really lucky to have a daughter who's talented and beautiful, just wish everthing ya wanted in life comes true for the both of you.