Capital Punishment Paper

I just finished writing a paper on capital punishment. I was wondering if some of you geniuses could help me edit it. I would prefer that this thread not become a debate over capital punishment. Although it would be nice if you could let me know through email if my logic is completely flawed. I have posted it on my blog, and if you cant find your way there, here is a link link. Im sorry the page isn't very pretty and may be hard to read. Also I know the paper is very very biased. Thats what the teacher wanted so thats what shes getting. Also I just took the easier position to argue. lol thanks!!