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I guess your right, I guess some people may not find the humor I was trying to inject, I am working on the next version of the book, I will clean it up. I keep forgetting those details. dont get me wrong, that did happen, I guess I can describe it cleaner.
Originally posted by amongus
Well, all I had to do is read your free book. As soon as you said that you "Busted your nugget" into this chick on board the UFO, I was out. Cmon. . . You dont do your claims any service by writing something so poorly. The grays waived to a car as they passed? Huh?? Where are those witnesses??
[edit on 27-11-2006 by amongus]
Originally posted by amongus
Cmon. . . You dont do your claims any service by writing something so poorly.
thank you, your right too, I was not trying to be politically correct,
Originally posted by Esoteric Teacher
Originally posted by amongus
Cmon. . . You dont do your claims any service by writing something so poorly.
What is he suppose to do? Use grammar and language that he doesn't know?
Just because someone can not find the right words to properly explain an experience does not mean something was not experienced that they are trying to explain.
Originally posted by ufotimetravel
just wondering, does anyone know typical questions a professional interviewer would ask alien abductee's?
I understand, I dont know, I guess I am just feeling like something is missing.
Originally posted by Esoteric Teacher
Originally posted by ufotimetravel
just wondering, does anyone know typical questions a professional interviewer would ask alien abductee's?
something tells me that they may have given up on questions. why? perhaps at first the "professional interviewers" were looking for patterns between those who had been or claimed to have been abducted. However, i am sure there may be some questions on the list that they would ask, if they were real, and if they were asking:
Do you have any family?
Are you, or have you ever been married?
What is it you dislike most?
Originally posted by ufotimetravel
I understand, I dont know, I guess I am just feeling like something is missing.
Originally posted by Esoteric Teacher
Originally posted by amongus
Cmon. . . You dont do your claims any service by writing something so poorly.
What is he suppose to do? Use grammar and language that he doesn't know?
Just because someone can not find the right words to properly explain an experience does not mean something was not experienced that they are trying to explain.
hey thanks for the link, I havent got the chance to read the whole thing yet, I was interuppted many times. anyway, I will give some feedback soon.
Originally posted by Esoteric Teacher
Originally posted by ufotimetravel
I understand, I dont know, I guess I am just feeling like something is missing.
i too feel like som thing is missing.
i too find it difficult to express it in words.
i am doing it, though. with help. here if you are interested:
www.belowtopsecret.com...'
[edit on 29-11-2006 by Esoteric Teacher]
I understand, your not the first to criticize my choice of words, but I honestly saw nothing wrong until it was pointed out to me, but I recognize what I need to do to spread my message.
Originally posted by amongus
Originally posted by Esoteric Teacher
Originally posted by amongus
Cmon. . . You dont do your claims any service by writing something so poorly.
What is he suppose to do? Use grammar and language that he doesn't know?
Just because someone can not find the right words to properly explain an experience does not mean something was not experienced that they are trying to explain.
Just trying to be helpful, and cut to the chase. Let me put it to you this way. Its the difference between a faked UFO /alien photo and the real thing. The crappier the effort, the easier it is to discount, or prove that its a fake.
Have you read his account? I got to the point I mentioned and couldnt take it seriously any further. Read it and tell me if you can. . . seriously, no. . really.
timetravel, I am not saying that you didnt experience something. Just saying that if you want to be taken seriously, put out a serious product. At least you admit that though.
take it as you will big guy, extra manly man, nobody is forcing you to believe anything, I am not trying to come across all book smart, yeah I busted a nugget in her, should I have said, I transmitted an orgasm into the female lower intestinal area?, kids might not understand that not to mention, what 9 year old says that?? you come on, I am not a scholar but I use my wits and try to make it a little entertaining its not like anyone believes it anyway, I am sticking to my gut, sorry if you dont like one phrase from a book.
Originally posted by origin
give it up little man "bust a nugget" and greys who wave to cars. How old are you...9. not trying to be rude, but its people like this that ruin the credability of real abductee's.
hey I have been honest the whole way so far, I am sorry your not convinced, when I say version, I am going to say things like "ejaculated" instead of "busted a nugget" OK?
Originally posted by origin
You keep using the word "entertaining". I havent read many accounts where an abductee try's to be funny and entertaing with their experiance if they truly belive it was real. Most seem quite shocked and somewhat traumatized by the experiance. They dont write different "Versions" of their book, a PG version and R version. If it really happened you wouldnt have trouble figuring out whats missing and try to spice it up comedy and sex....
Seems to me your making light of something serious which is fine, just label it fiction.
I'm sorry, just seems like everyone and their brother is writing stories about being abducted these days, or finding new entrances to hidden top secret bases or whatever. Wish people didnt think they had to make a story up to feel cool, me personaly, I have trouble taking anyone serious on their word.
This is only my opinion, and if this really happened to you, then I'm sorry. I'm just pointing out why I have dought.