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Merry-Go-Round Ride

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posted on Nov, 24 2024 @ 04:08 PM
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Falling, falling, I feel myself falling.
When I close my eyes, I hear you calling.
The sound of your sweet voice so enthralling.
Can’t make it out, running, walking, crawling.

Is this real, this, real, is this real what I am feeling for you? (For you).
Is this love in my healing heart true? (So true).
Do you feel it growing inside you too? (You too).

Pounding, pounding, I feel my heart pounding.
Thoughts of you swirling and surrounding
Thoughts of you deep in my heart resounding.
The seeds of love the root of their founding.

Is this real, this, real, is this real what I am feeling for you? (For you).
Is this love in my healing heart true? (So true).
Do you feel it growing inside you too? (You too).

Flying, flying, I find I am flying
Walking with the sun overhead trying
To grasp the blowing winds without lying
To my heart and this pain that is crying

Is this real, this, real, is this real what I am feeling for you? (For you).
Is this love in my healing heart true? (So true).
Do you feel it growing inside you too? (You too).

Will you stay with me on this merry-go-ride?
Although I know your hands are already tied.


Here goes another poem I wrote today. Playing around with Lyric to Song AI some more:



edit on Sun, 24 Nov 2024 16:15:46 -0600pm112420241100000046America/ChicagoSun, 24 Nov 2024 16:15:46 -0600 by randomuser2034 because: (no reason given)



posted on Nov, 24 2024 @ 05:08 PM
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a reply to: randomuser2034

Beautiful!



posted on Nov, 24 2024 @ 05:39 PM
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a reply to: randomuser2034

I think it's great prose, and the song is a hit. It's not my kind of music, but I can clearly hear the talent and purity of it. Well done!!!



posted on Nov, 24 2024 @ 06:07 PM
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its nice when word to love are written by someone else and they capture a moment in your own life to

thanks



posted on Nov, 24 2024 @ 06:16 PM
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originally posted by: argentus
a reply to: randomuser2034

I think it's great prose, and the song is a hit. It's not my kind of music, but I can clearly hear the talent and purity of it. Well done!!!



You humble me. Thank you for the kind words.



posted on Nov, 24 2024 @ 06:20 PM
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originally posted by: JJproductions
a reply to: randomuser2034

Beautiful!


😊Thanks!



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