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Gone --- Non Writer HS2023

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posted on Dec, 20 2023 @ 07:23 AM
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One would never have known
by the way that I drove,
recklessly through farmed acres,
that it had been my grandmother's car.

Grinning with loud music wailing,
I swerve to miss a tree
after a sharp turn ...
tires skidding over wet blacktop,
then I glance down.

Shrinking suddenly, I spy a glove
wedged between the seats.

An old, small, black,
empty -- woman's glove.









THE END



posted on Dec, 20 2023 @ 07:45 AM
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a reply to: Fowlerstoad

A sad reminder of our own folly and the loss of a loved one.

Perhaps a reality check too. Very poingant!

S+F Mr Toad!

edit on 20-12-2023 by midicon because: (no reason given)



posted on Dec, 20 2023 @ 10:17 AM
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a reply to: Fowlerstoad

Good one, Fowlerstoad!

There's so much unsaid and questions that come to mind. But, the only real doubt is if the driver is about to meet his long-lost grandmother... or will she, thorough divine intervention (and that glove), spare him... and the car?




posted on Dec, 20 2023 @ 10:19 PM
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a reply to: Fowlerstoad

S+F
Don't forget to link from the contest page.




posted on Dec, 21 2023 @ 09:51 AM
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a reply to: Fowlerstoad

Very nice! S/F



posted on Dec, 23 2023 @ 07:03 PM
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a reply to: Fowlerstoad

A good read that makes us think about how fleeting life is, and those that have travelled a similar road.



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