R.I.Pin' Non-Writer HS2023, page 1

posted on Dec, 4 2023 @ 06:25 PM

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I awoke.
A bit colder than usual…
It was darker than expected;
My eyes are as dry as dust.
My breath is hot and humid as always…
That smell is damp musty cloth.

Don’t ask how…
But this grave is nine years old;
Where is yours?

JJproductions

posted on Dec, 4 2023 @ 06:29 PM

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a reply to: crowf00t

Mine is in the sky! S/F

crowf00t

posted on Dec, 4 2023 @ 06:33 PM

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Encia22

posted on Dec, 5 2023 @ 05:26 AM

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a reply to: crowf00t

Intriguing story, crowf00t.

Those few words got my curiosity racing to fill in the blanks... movie time in my mind.

crowf00t

posted on Dec, 5 2023 @ 08:28 AM

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a reply to: Encia22

Character list
outline
framing
storyboard
casting
action!

Encia22

posted on Dec, 5 2023 @ 08:40 AM

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a reply to: crowf00t

LOL, absolutely!

And lots and lots of popcorn!

Agleaya

posted on Dec, 15 2023 @ 04:36 AM

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a reply to: crowf00t

s/f

SprocketUK

posted on Dec, 17 2023 @ 02:59 PM

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a reply to: crowf00t

Well you left plenty of gaps for our imaginations to fill in once you set them on the right path

Nice one!