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R.I.Pin' Non-Writer HS2023

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crowf00t

posted on Dec, 4 2023 @ 06:25 PM
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I awoke.
A bit colder than usual…
It was darker than expected;
My eyes are as dry as dust.
My breath is hot and humid as always…
That smell is damp musty cloth.

Don’t ask how…
But this grave is nine years old;
Where is yours?



JJproductions

posted on Dec, 4 2023 @ 06:29 PM
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Mine is in the sky! S/F


crowf00t

posted on Dec, 4 2023 @ 06:33 PM
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Encia22

posted on Dec, 5 2023 @ 05:26 AM
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Intriguing story, crowf00t.

Those few words got my curiosity racing to fill in the blanks... movie time in my mind.



crowf00t

posted on Dec, 5 2023 @ 08:28 AM
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Character list
outline
framing
storyboard
casting
action!


Encia22

posted on Dec, 5 2023 @ 08:40 AM
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LOL, absolutely!

And lots and lots of popcorn!



Agleaya

posted on Dec, 15 2023 @ 04:36 AM
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s/f


SprocketUK

posted on Dec, 17 2023 @ 02:59 PM
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Well you left plenty of gaps for our imaginations to fill in once you set them on the right path
Nice one!




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