The Merriment of Azathoth

Skies of static dragons
dissonic points of view,
You are me and I am you.
HAIL DIVINE CHAOS.

Electric pylons loom,
Dancing daemons boom,
Mazey dreams zoom
.SIRE SIRE SIRE

Mists of chaos candy
mystic cast of spells,
Journey lovecraftian hells.
HAIL DIVINE CHAOS.

Electric dreams boom,
Dancing pylons zoom,
Mazey daemons loom
.SIRE SIRE SIRE [RISE RISE RISE]

a reply to: Warpstone

Love it, Warpstone!

I've used that style of alternating the styles of the stanzas. I don't have a clue if it's an established method, but I enjoy writing like that. I particularly like how you didn't just repeat the second and fourth stanzas, but you mixed and matched.

originally posted by: Encia22
a reply to: Warpstone

Love it, Warpstone!

I've used that style of alternating the styles of the stanzas. I don't have a clue if it's an established method, but I enjoy writing like that. I particularly like how you didn't just repeat the second and fourth stanzas, but you mixed and matched.

I much appreciate that you like it. It was written by myself some years ago, taken from a journal of strange and disturbing poetry which sadly has been lost.
The Merriment of Azathoth is the last completed poem that had been saved on a text file. All that remains now are a series notes scribbled on a single piece of paper, ideas that wait patiently in a limbo state waiting to be summoned forth into blasphemous celebration.

a reply to: Warpstone

That's terrible news. To lose your creations is disheartening, but take heart in the fact that you can never lose your creativity.

I'm glad this one survived, the others you will resurrect.