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posted on Jul, 5 2023 @ 11:32 AM
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Blank Spaces


I am _____ most of the time,
My words are ____ forever,
But when you read this in your _____,
We’ll write this poem together.

What most people don’t recognize,
What most of us fail to _______,
Is that I don’t write every ________,
You all do that for me.

Fill in the blanks to make it yours,
Let’s create a masterpiece,
I promise you that it always _____,
And your words will make it _____.

Writing is a two way street,
Between the writer and the _____,
My poems would never be complete,
If you never chose to ______.

Words combined with emotion,
interpreted, collected, and _____,
Each person finding a different way,
To express themselves and their _____.

In the end, we’ll reach the same _____,
And bring forth some creative _____,
Which adds an element to the poem,
That I could never do _____.


Thanks,
blend



posted on Jul, 5 2023 @ 11:34 AM
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a reply to: blend57

You made me space out! That was a great poem!



posted on Jul, 5 2023 @ 12:22 PM
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a reply to: blend57

Fart is the missing word?
It was a funny poem if so...

Sorry couldn't resist, cool idea.



posted on Jul, 5 2023 @ 12:56 PM
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a reply to: blend57

Intriguing poem, blend57. It's innovative, interactive and cryptic.




posted on Jul, 5 2023 @ 03:13 PM
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a reply to: blend57

I am the highway most of the time,
My words are forever,
But when you read this in your bed,
We’ll write this poem together.
 
What most people don’t recognize,
Is What most of us fail to eat,
That is why I don’t write every moment,
You all do that for me.
 
Fill in the blanks to make it yours,
Let’s create a masterpiece,
I promise you that I will always care,
And your words will make me float,
 
Writing is a two way street,
Between the writer and the master,
My poems would never be complete,
If you ever chose to delete,
 
Words combined with emotion,
interpreted, collected, and divine,
Each person finding a different way,
To express themselves and their rhyme,
 
In the end, we’ll reach the same point,
I promise to never disappoint,



posted on Jul, 5 2023 @ 03:37 PM
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a reply to: JJproductions
Thank you so much for sharing what you filled the blanks with.

There were some words you used that I never thought of. Different minds, different thoughts, different words...that's what makes this world, and your poem, beautiful.

Thanks again!,
Blend



posted on Jul, 5 2023 @ 03:39 PM
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a reply to: Terpene

Fill those blanks with what ever you think truly represents who you are..it's your poem. Do as you wish (don't get banned though..lol)

Thank you!

edit on 5-7-2023 by blend57 because: (no reason given)



posted on Jul, 5 2023 @ 03:41 PM
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a reply to: Encia22
I can see that you are a true lover of poetry and writing in general. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my writings.

Always good to see you and read what you have to say.

blend



posted on Jul, 5 2023 @ 03:48 PM
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a reply to: blend57

Everyone thinks different! I might think 2+6=3 and you think it is 27. You poem was fun, thank you for sharing it.



posted on Jul, 5 2023 @ 04:12 PM
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a reply to: blend57

While I appreciate the space offered to truly represent who I am, it feels impossible to do so by filling out blank spaces on a discussion board, by typing on a device.
There is so much more to us, I've come to the conclusion that anything short of an encounter is too little to even try to grasp who someone trully is...

Fart in it's variants works actually quite well, it has a certain childish beauty, which amongst certain strata of society seems to be quite disruptive...

Still love the idea... I'll give it a try



I am smelly. most of the time,
My words are muffled forever,
But when you read this in your elevator,
We’ll write this poem together.

What most people don’t recognize,
What most of us fail to digest,
Is that I don’t write every fart.
You all do that for me.

Fill in the blanks to make it yours,
Let’s create a masterpiece,
I promise you that it always stinks
And your words will make it worse.

Writing is a two way street,
Between the writer and the flatulences,
My poems would never be complete,
If you never chose to fart.

Words combined with emotion,
interpreted, collected, and fared,
Each person finding a different way,
To express themselves and their farts.

In the end, we’ll reach the same conclusions,
And bring forth some creative excrements.
Which adds an element to the poem,
That I could never do
FART.

Don't threaten me with a ban, you asked for it...



posted on Jul, 5 2023 @ 04:22 PM
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a reply to: Terpene

A very unusual poem. I definitely would never have filled those spaces like that. Thanks for taking the time to share.

Nice to meet you Terpene and thank you for your thoughts. Interesting....


blend



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