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As dirt turns to sand…

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posted on Jun, 5 2023 @ 02:58 PM
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As she glistened near the beach, time she fell was of deep, waters to lie, time to cry, cheers away from sands of deep, mountains to fall, time to heal, wounds of deep, bye to by, he saw the tears in her eyes, through it all, into - out of, there comes a time for it all…

The rivers moon never too deep, for sands of time, a newer mind, way too deep with love to keep, humble darkness never too tall, they lost it all with words they call, he waves goodbye to his dream as dirt turns to sand…who is he to keep…



posted on Jun, 5 2023 @ 03:01 PM
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a reply to: JJproductions

Pretty good would have made a decent entry but I think your existing one is still better



posted on Jun, 5 2023 @ 03:10 PM
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a reply to: SprocketUK

Thank you, Sprocket. I wrote that one as a dream story. Thank you for reading it.



posted on Jun, 6 2023 @ 08:21 PM
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a reply to: JJproductions

Yes, it is dreamy and I find it oddly melodic.

Cheers, JJ




posted on Jun, 6 2023 @ 09:23 PM
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a reply to: Encia22

Thank you kindly for reading. It was a dream turned into a song.



posted on Jun, 6 2023 @ 11:32 PM
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a reply to: JJproductions

Would love to hear the song. Anything original is good.




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