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Maxmars
There are a ton of errors but it's a start. I am trying to put bits and pieces of information all into one sensible database.
Could this be the next Star Trek or the next Star Wars?
Yes, 100%. That is the long-range fantasy.
Warmen; that is the name I may have finally settled on.
Some unique terminology:
Warman-a military fighter in the Feditary. Everyone in the Feditary has survived the battlefield as a Warman.
Feditary-Earth One's Federal Military of Outer Space
Earth One-the feather-planet of humanity
Credit-the currency of the Feditary
Coin-a term used to describe any residence
Zero-a prison cell
Penny-a small residence
SpaceNet-the internight of outer space
Tac-a Diety that everyone in the Feditary is required to worship
Rebel-a former member of the Feditary that has stolen resources and left the spaceship to live on a planet illegally
Upper-a derogatory term that rebels use to describe members of the Feditary
Tripidion-a violent alien species based on a system of threes
Tripe-a derogatory term used to describe a Tripidion
Paratike-an infectious alien rodent that eats its own feces; it is also a cannibal
DropTroop-a special forces Warman that drops into a planet to harvest resources or kill rebels
Oh My Stars-an expression used when someone is amazed by something
Lords of the Universe-a derogatory curse phrase that is blasphemous toward Tac
J-12-the primary weapon used by Warman; a ballistic rifle for short and medium-range combat
K-200-the primary weapon used by DropTroops against rebels; a laser rifle used for long-range combat
K-201-the primary weapon used by experienced Warman against the Tripidions; a ballistic rifle used for long-range combat
L-2-a laser cannon used by DropTroops for long-range artillery
L-3-an artillery cannon used by DropTroops for long-range combat
Time Crystals-a unique mineral used in the warp drive; ***CLASSIFIED***
ALICE AI-the AI for every spaceship in the Feditary
Core Element-a power source used to electrify components on a spaceship; targeted by Tripidions
Primary Core Element-a power source used to electrify Core Elements; primary target of the Tripidions
Calf-livestock for humans; a pre-adult Tripidion under 3 1/2 years old (Earth One years)
Cycle-a full Feditary day
PregTech-a biotech managed on the SpaceNet for birth control purposes; monitors an adolescent's sexual abstinence
Zicourian-a highly conductive mineral
Xyphor-a highly conductive mineral; an elegant jewel preferred by the wealthy over gold or diamond
Dark-a derogatory term used by rebels to describe Feditary DropTroops and Flag Officers
Ang-the highest rank in the Feditary
Paste-an artificial food element consumed by the lower classes
SubPaste-an artificial food element consumed by the very lowest classes
Synthetic Water-partially artificial water served in a gelatin-type form
Slave-a minimum security prisoner that is allowed out of their cell to serve a high-ranking officer during the day
Ceeball-a popular contact sport based in part on football (NFL) and basketball
Warball-a popular sport that simulates combat for entertainment purposes
Traupee-a popular morning beverage usually served boiling hot
Blue-a popular cold beverage usually served to adolescents and young adults that has a blue hue
Glow-a substance sprayed onto a Warman by a Tripidion that makes the Warman glow for about 2 weeks. While a Tripidion can identify the glow over 1
mile away, a Warman requires detecting technology to see it. The substance is invisible to the human eye and quickly seeps throw clothing and skin,
settling in the bloodstream. A single glowing human can give away every Warman in the area. Infected Warmen generally feel a sense of humiliation
when they discover they are glowing. An infected Warman can spread the glow to other Warmen, to a lesser degree. Highly contagious.