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Odds and Ends--In Memory of a Loved One

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posted on Jan, 24 2023 @ 12:59 PM
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Odds and Ends

Spread out like this
the various odds and ends
ins and outs
of a lifetime
displayed sorrows, beauty
coveted trinkets
unfinished business
A treasured snapshot
of an estranged son
tucked into an empty journal.
Windows into a happier time
unladen by complexities
and griefs
When all futures still lay ahead
When the pages were still unwritten.
It’s odd-this end
At odds in the end
Re-bound and peace found
At peace in the end
All the cares stashed, stored,
hidden, endured
Dissolved with dissolution
Offered a solution
A very hard solution
A tentative resolution
Leaving behind
small treasures of hours measured
And
a
very
BIG
hole
But a lifetime of love to fill it.


edit on 24-1-2023 by zosimov because: (no reason given)



posted on Jan, 24 2023 @ 02:32 PM
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a reply to: zosimov

I felt it...



posted on Jan, 24 2023 @ 04:12 PM
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a reply to: olaru12

Thanks, olaru, this response means a lot to me.
I'm planning to read this in memory of my aunt at a poetry slam she and I used to frequent, and it's good to know that it can be understood/felt by others.



posted on Jan, 25 2023 @ 08:06 PM
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Very Expressive with a lot of feelings behind it.

Thanks for sharing,
Johnny



posted on Jan, 26 2023 @ 08:18 AM
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a reply to: JohnnyAnonymous

Thanks for reading, Johnny. You're right--lots of feelings went into this one.





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