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SAVVY Gorilla - SN2022

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posted on Jun, 28 2022 @ 02:28 PM
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SAVVY the gorilla, from his zoo enclosure, kept looking to the sky, swatting the air.

Jimmy, his keeper noticed this odd behaviour, and that he wouldn’t eat peanuts given him; instead, hoard them as ammunition to throw back at the gawkers.

In sign language, Jimmy asked SAVVY, “What’s wrong?”

SAVVY frowning, pointed to the sky, interlocked his fingers and then shook his head violently.

Jimmy, bewildered, “SAVVY, I don’t understand.”

Amazingly, SAVVY started speaking, “Those crazy aliens want to edit my DNA and turn me bloody human! Well, you can all just piss off!”

SAVVY scuttled away, never to return…

The END







posted on Jun, 28 2022 @ 03:34 PM
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a reply to: Encia22

I found this one to be quite cute. Well done!
SAVVY knows what's up; who'd want to be one of us?



posted on Jun, 28 2022 @ 03:41 PM
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a reply to: Encia22

If only I knew we could add pictures. Ohhh the horror it would have added. Lol



posted on Jun, 28 2022 @ 08:30 PM
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a reply to: zosimov

Thanks very much, zosimov! I've appreciated your continued feedback during this contest, and I've enjoyed reading and interacting with your contributions.

I got the same feeling when revising it.

I wrote it with the intention of empathising with animals in captivity, but it evolved with the alien and biological engineering angle.




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posted on Jun, 28 2022 @ 08:35 PM
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a reply to: TheAlleghenyGentleman

Yep, I was afraid to at the beginning. But not seeing in the OP an explicit restriction, I tried in a few of my recent stories.

I'd love to see you add some artwork to yours. Perhaps, you can just post them in each thread anyway. Smoke 'em if you've got' em!




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posted on Jun, 29 2022 @ 12:36 AM
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Enjoyed your Story!

Good Luck in the Contest!
Johnny



posted on Jun, 29 2022 @ 07:05 AM
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a reply to: Encia22

I love your story, and I wonder if humans are the aliens...



posted on Jun, 29 2022 @ 09:10 AM
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a reply to: Encia22

I've really enjoyed the interactions from this contest as well! And just love all the art being generated.

On a side note, does SAVVY have a British accent?



posted on Jun, 29 2022 @ 09:50 AM
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Wonderful Story ! Always found it quite un-nerving seeing Gorillas in the zoo, more than any of the other animals they seem to understand what’s up and that they aren’t free.



posted on Jun, 29 2022 @ 10:23 AM
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a reply to: xpert11

Thank you, xpert11!

Yes, we very well could be... we definitely are in the eyes of animals.




posted on Jun, 29 2022 @ 10:25 AM
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a reply to: zosimov

Cheers zosimov!

Yes, I wish more people had used some pictures or artwork... just like a book cover, it gives a visual perspective to the story.

Absolutely! I grew up in both the USA and UK, but England was my last port of call. I guess their expressions just stuck more in my mind.




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posted on Jun, 29 2022 @ 10:30 AM
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a reply to: MountainLaurel

I'm glad you enjoyed it, MountainLaurel!

Yes, I don't ever recall seeing a happy gorilla in any zoo. Their eyes are so contemplative and emotive, and all I see is sadness.




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