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The Ancient FIre. ---SN2022

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posted on Jun, 24 2022 @ 07:36 PM
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The Fire Rages.

Its silence is deafening , no form, no emotions, no stopping it.

Its roar grows as the oxygen is consumed , the matter is made dust with such ferocity.

It pulls my gaze I cannot look away , the screaming I cannot look away , it consumes all and I cannot look away .

The heat becomes too much but I cannot run, I cannot move , there is no escaping it . My screams rise but the roars consume them .

My own destruction is at hand and I cannot look away .

There is no stopping it , The fire Rages.

edit on Fri Jun 24 2022 by DontTreadOnMe because: (no reason given)



posted on Jun, 25 2022 @ 02:13 AM
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Thanks for your submission,

Good Luck in the Contest
Johnny



posted on Jun, 25 2022 @ 02:40 AM
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a reply to: asabuvsobelow

Thank you. I like the imagery your tale provokes.

Cheers



posted on Jun, 25 2022 @ 01:35 PM
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a reply to: asabuvsobelow

Perfect! This would make a great song!





posted on Jun, 25 2022 @ 02:02 PM
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a reply to: F2d5thCavv2

thank you .



posted on Jun, 25 2022 @ 02:03 PM
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originally posted by: Encia22
a reply to: asabuvsobelow

Perfect! This would make a great song!




your kind words are appreciated



posted on Jun, 25 2022 @ 02:26 PM
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a reply to: asabuvsobelow

Most welcome, asabuvsobelow.


Actually, to be more specific, and Iron Maiden song...




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