My trip to another world (based on the old movie earth as an island or something close to it)

My story is not like most stories you have probably heard or seen. No no no my story is different it doesn't start with a "Once upon a time," or a "In a galaxy far far away..". No i'm or was just an ordinary run of the mill kind of person just like every one else until that faithfull day here i'll describe it to you.


It was a cool afternoon no wind just me sitting under a tall oak tree that stretches miles into the sky. I decided to build my grampa joe a little tool shed so he can store all of his tools in. Granted it was his birthday in a couple of weeks so I decided i would start now. I got up and headed to the barn to get the tools i needed. When this loud and erie shreak came from the corn fields out in the yonder doing what any one else would i picked up my 12-gauge and made my way over there.


Upon reaching my destination I made a terrible discovery it was my girlfriend she was brutally murdered she had burn't marks all over her body. While I was mourning for the loss of my girlfriend some thing behind me stirred the bushes. Putting my dead girlfriend down I reached for my shotgun and followed that person or thing swearing revenge on him or her.


The next day I attended her funeral I could see how much this has affected her parents, me, her friends, and relatives. I couldn't bear looking at her any more knowing that i failed her. That night i stood up all night waiting for the culprit to return. I fell in and out of sleep i tried as much as i could to not fall asleep because every time i did i would have the same nightmare which scared the begebers out of me.

I finally fell asleep dreaming of that night when i was going to build that shed i could here the horrific screams then silence utter silence. I think i dozed off for about an hour or so when I finally woke up it took me a few minutes to regain full conciousness. I looked around wildely wondering where in the world was i now. The room I was in was riddled with computers, dodads, and fancy gadgets it looked like some science fiction movie. I got off the table and headed for the door when i encountered a person hmm i would say 4-10 or 5-1 not much taller than me.(im about 5-0)

I asked him the usual questions after you have been abducted like "where am I" or " Who are you" he answered all my questions with full detail. Then he showed me around the space craft. These guys must have been nice though i forgot what race he was he said that his race was elite and are now recruiting ppl that are there friends allies and they chose earth. Since earth is nuetral meaning they haven't fought any wars thye are considered nuetral.


I then asked him where he was taking me he answered "Malachor V" then before you know it i am here making one last message to tell everyone that i love them and if i don't return to always remember me. "This is Sion commander and chief of the republican army logging out"

Good story... Keep up the good work. Freaky though gave me the chills...

Originally posted by cpr12r
Good story... Keep up the good work. Freaky though gave me the chills...

i thought it was good i think i will be a good writer i hope john lets me every one hope with me

*crosses as many body parts as he can*

good luck.

Originally posted by cpr12r
*crosses as many body parts as he can*

good luck.

thanx