posted on May, 9 2020 @ 01:18 AM
a reply to:
pheonix358
No hard feelings.
My friend and I wrote it and frankly found it very hard to judge our own sense of humor. But in retrospect we have had to face the fact, that we
properly aren't the best comedic writers out there, nor voice actors for that matter.
We're two guys who grew up watching South Park and such, and basically wanted to try and do something like that. So yes, it was meant to be funny.
English isn't our first language, and perhaps we were to optimistic to think we could pull this of. Looking back at it now, it is also clear to me
that the frequency with which we present jokes is much too low. I guess by the time you stop watching we had barely gotten started, not to say that it
gets a lot better down the line. But I would say I usually chuckle at about 3-4 jokes throughout the whole thing. But even if that was enough I doubt
that this alone would have been enough to hook anyone.
Because besides the humor being below average, there isn't any obvious story line to hook anyone.
It is possible that we put to much focus on the animation. Not sure if it shows, but there were not a lot of rewrites of the script. We kinda just
hoped that it was "good enough".
edit on 06/06/12 by Mads1987 because: (no reason given)
edit on 06/06/12 by Mads1987 because: (no reason given)