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a reply to: Lumenari

This was a great read. I like how you started that second post right where the story was about to take a turn.

Imagine if there were a way to get rid of that pesky good angel (one's conscience) -- you think a lot of people would go for the procedure?

originally posted by: ColoradoJens
a reply to: Lumenari

Nice Lumenari! I would not personally want to mess with Cheryl. Somehow Tarantino would love the character.

Thanks for the diversion tonight!

You are very welcome and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

originally posted by: SprocketUK
a reply to: Lumenari

Oh I liked that.

You always were a "woman on a rampage" fan.

originally posted by: zosimov
a reply to: Lumenari

This was a great read. I like how you started that second post right where the story was about to take a turn.

Imagine if there were a way to get rid of that pesky good angel (one's conscience) -- you think a lot of people would go for the procedure?

Thank you!

I tried to do a few "technical" things with this entry to make the flow of the story work right.

As far as your question, one would hope not.

But based on empirical evidence, they have already perfected the procedure for politicians...

That was an amazing story, I really like to see this from another perspective when it would be angels instead of demons

originally posted by: 0bserver1
That was an amazing story, I really like to see this from another perspective when it would be angels instead of demons

Maybe the next topic will be "Angles" and I will continue the story with a twist...

Thank you for the compliment.

originally posted by: Lumenari

originally posted by: SprocketUK
a reply to: Lumenari

Oh I liked that.

You always were a "woman on a rampage" fan.

Quite right

originally posted by: SprocketUK

originally posted by: Lumenari

originally posted by: SprocketUK
a reply to: Lumenari

Oh I liked that.

You always were a "woman on a rampage" fan.

Quite right

I am working on something you wanted me to write awhile ago... an extension of my AI contest entry... Lyssa.

It's on chapter two now... I can't seem to wrap it up and it has taken on a life of its own.

a reply to: Lumenari

Wow, really? It's good when a story runs way with you. Just gotta keep on hanging on for the ride.

a reply to: Lumenari

I like your story and the formatting, i.e., creative use of the quotation boxes.

Nice work, S+F.

originally posted by: DictionaryOfExcuses
a reply to: Lumenari

I like your story and the formatting, i.e., creative use of the quotation boxes.

Nice work, S+F.

Why thank you!

I think these contests make us all better as writers.

We have a lot of amazing talent out there to compete against.

You are one of them.