Never trust the wiring - SS2019

Though my life has always been vibrant and my experiences vivid.... I've always asked myself is this real.

All those I love drive me, our memories define me.

On my Daughter's wedding day a bright flash.

The wrong life flashed before my eyes, must have been the wreck.

The End.

a reply to: CriticalStinker

Very cool.

I really liked this idea. Well done!

originally posted by: zosimov
a reply to: CriticalStinker

Very cool.

I really liked this idea. Well done!

Thank you kindly , I liked your's as well.

I love this contests theme, dark typically gets more of a response in writing. I suppose we read to feel.

a reply to: CriticalStinker

I have to agree.
I've been waiting for a theme that struck me.
This seemed like the one.

Your story made me sad (in a good way)
Not sure how you did that ....
Well done!

a reply to: SupermassiveBlackHOLE

Thank you so much!

Since the topic was paranoia, I wanted to take a different approach... Usually the idea of paranoia is someone is out to get you, or it's suspicion of nothing.

a reply to: CriticalStinker

I would rather have suspicion of nothing and look like a fool.

Good point you bring up.
Never really thought of it like that