I hope you will like this one

Hey ATS.

Some of you friends maybe will remember me. I think ATS is a great source of feedback.

I decided to share a new piece to see if you like it. It finishes right at the chorus but the whole sound will give you an opinion. Any contribution is appreciated =)

To give some info; i record, play and compose myself at home.

db - old ways

edit: oh to add; i havent recorded the bass yet. will be done with the chorus and the whole song.


edit2: the lyrics

i still remember the old days
cant you remember all the shame
i still remember old ways
and i cant find another way

when you missed it
we all shared it
dont you fight gotta find another way
tell you something grows in you
you cant get away

a reply to: belkide

It really sounds promising. Go ahead adding the bass and little bit more of complexity after the first 4 lines of lyrics and the last 4 lines too.

a reply to: belkide

Nice, keep developing that. You've got something going there.

a reply to: belkide

Wow.

Very nice.
Why did we only get 39 seconds? I admit I usually don't want more music, as I am an elitist snob jerk. But I liked what I heard.

Great so far...

I'm interested in hearing the chordal movement into the bridge and how it resolves in the final verses.