The Dark Laughing God - New Writer YJA2017

Zorok was evil very evil, and his laughter echoed throughout the land of decendancy. He didn't want to run Hell, His humour became him,however, unlike his father, he had a plan. Yes a plan to change reality from what it was to something much greater. He had no idea what that would be because, he was making it up as he went, much like the author of this story you're reading right now.

He looked up into the sky and saw clouds shaped like objects. Bright and colourful they were. So much so that looking upon them was akin to shining a neon light into someones eyes. Blinding as sh't!

The elevator stopped on level 11. The sounds of screaming beings being tortured was damning. But, oh well right?

As Zorok stepped off the elevated hover device, he noticed how bright things were down there. Zorok was ever familiar with this kind of thing, and well, something was off. This only happened when there was a light short taking place.

He looked around for any signs of life, but then remembered Hell was full of dead people, so that thought didn't last longer than a shot of whisky on a friday night at home in the dark, watching reruns of the Twilight Zone.

Suddenly Zorok found the source of all the problems Hell was having, but he can't tell you because it's a secret and it would ruin the entire story im making up right now as i go along..

Zorok took over Hell and went back to the Over World, having left his pride behind, became a better person.

And the Moral of this story is...

Hell isn't half as hot as you might think it is. Not even close.

hahahaha

I knew you'd come through, friend!

Funny, too. Big smile on my face the whole time.

Fourth well-deserved star and flag for this contest.



ETA - my wife laughed the whole time I read it to her!

originally posted by: TarzanBeta
I knew you'd come through, friend!

Funny, too. Big smile on my face the whole time.

Fourth well-deserved star and flag for this contest.

ETA - my wife laughed the whole time I read it to her!

lol did she'? haha give her a hi-5 for me!

Awesome! And it took me all of 7 minutes to write. WoooHooo!

a reply to: Neith

Hi-5 transmission successful.

It doesn't take long to share a piece of someone's personality... It takes a long time to wrap it up in duct tape and pass it off as pop music.

7 minutes of genius.

originally posted by: TarzanBeta
a reply to: Neith

Hi-5 transmission successful.

It doesn't take long to share a piece of someone's personality... It takes a long time to wrap it up in duct tape and pass it off as pop music.

7 minutes of genius.

Awesome I couldn't have said it better! Now, why aren't I a fricking millionaire right now! Or am I

originally posted by: Neith

originally posted by: TarzanBeta
a reply to: Neith

Hi-5 transmission successful.

It doesn't take long to share a piece of someone's personality... It takes a long time to wrap it up in duct tape and pass it off as pop music.

7 minutes of genius.

Awesome I couldn't have said it better!

Now, why aren't I fricking millionaire right now!

Because only talent combined with opportunity combined with being directed to shoot your closest family member in the face during an examination will beget that kind of reward for writing, music, or acting.

And you could probably ignore the talent part for that.

a reply to: Neith

Hey Neith!!

I gave you a S&F for numerous reasons, lol.

I seriously thought you might be hinting about the "Mandela Effect"...and your mention of the number "11".
Glad to know that there's humour in Hell. (and maybe conspiracy theories too)

jacy

a reply to: Neith

I come back and see that "or am I" and I think....

"No sh!t."

a reply to: Neith

That was great.
I do love that stream of conciousness style.

a reply to: jacygirl

Thanks for that

a reply to: SprocketUK

The stream flows perfectly and thank you!

I've read all of the stories now. Some I couldn't get all the way through, others I could, but the emotional content didn't bring me to climax, and a few others I enjoyed.

This is my favorite. By far.

I'm a melodramatic type in my writing, serious with strangers, and an odd mixture of Robin Williams and Jim Carrey with my family.

I'm also picky to a fault.

Zorok just became a character I would like to know more about.

This is after careful consideration, of course. The initial enjoyment has turned into curiosity.

Maybe you'll run with this 7 minute inspiration?

originally posted by: TarzanBeta
a reply to: Neith

I come back and see that "or am I

" and I think....

"No sh!t."

Shhhh (looks both ways).

originally posted by: TarzanBeta
I've read all of the stories now. Some I couldn't get all the way through, others I could, but the emotional content didn't bring me to climax, and a few others I enjoyed.

This is my favorite. By far.

I'm a melodramatic type in my writing, serious with strangers, and an odd mixture of Robin Williams and Jim Carrey with my family.

I'm also picky to a fault.

Zorok just became a character I would like to know more about.

This is after careful consideration, of course. The initial enjoyment has turned into curiosity.

Maybe you'll run with this 7 minute inspiration?

Wow Thank you! I am inspired to carry out Zoroks mission now thanks to you. This should be interesting lol.

Jim Carey in his youth was funniest, and Robin Williams another Icon!

My yes! I saw dark g-d and need respond to this. Ori is a dark g-d too.

Funny you add that humor it make your story even greater.

That veddy good I know it.

originally posted by: T0rMenT0R
My yes! I saw dark g-d and need respond to this. Ori is a dark g-d too.

Funny you add that humor it make your story even greater.

That veddy good I know it.

Am I the only one creeped out by this response? Heeee....

a reply to: Neith

Those aren't even my words. It's my family trying to torture me with simile! But who am I to say who I am?

I mean, what are you? Every surgeon knows how to put us back together; what could really be so different.

originally posted by: TarzanBeta
a reply to: Neith

Those aren't even my words. It's my family trying to torture me with simile! But who am I to say who I am?

I mean, what are you? Every surgeon knows how to put us back together; what could really be so different.

lol you have a crazy family too. They're so much fun aren't they?

I know right, crazy glue may be up for the job but i dunno, it may take Gorilla glue and then some.

originally posted by: Neith

originally posted by: TarzanBeta
a reply to: Neith

Those aren't even my words. It's my family trying to torture me with simile! But who am I to say who I am?

I mean, what are you? Every surgeon knows how to put us back together; what could really be so different.

lol you have a crazy family too. They're so much fun aren't they?

I know right, crazy glue may be up for the job but i dunno, it may take Gorilla glue and then some.

Gorilla glue - the only glue for broken Birth Control Goggles.

a reply to: TarzanBeta

Yeah that was a little creepy wasn't it? lol.