The Man in the White Coat [YJA2017]

originally posted by: Night Star

Great writing Mason! Well done!

Thanks Elfy.

Champagne? Caviar?

originally posted by: FauxMulder
I had read 4 or 5 so far and I was wondering when I would get to a "hell" story. Nice job man, made me laugh.

It had to be a different Hell though, life with a perpetual paper cut or constant reruns of Full House.

a reply to: AugustusMasonicus

I had something completely different started but scraped it last night. I just felt like doing 'hell as a serious annoyance', type thing.

I can't imagine anything better so I am glad you went with this one.


P.S. Poor Tom should have checked with me as I could have told him Everclear is death. May as well drink rocket fuel.
Unless, of course, it's got some fruit, a little rum...ice and one has a penchant for tempting the Reaper.

originally posted by: TNMockingbird
I can't imagine anything better so I am glad you went with this one.

The other one was more of a silly Q&A with an angel where the guy gets to ask any questions he wants and gets really stupid answers.

P.S. Poor Tom should have checked with me as I could have told him Everclear is death. May as well drink rocket fuel.
Unless, of course, it's got some fruit, a little rum...ice and one has a penchant for tempting the Reaper.

I use it to make lemoncello and limecello. And prior to paragliding.

a reply to: AugustusMasonicus

Lemoncello is delicious!

a reply to: Night Star

It's also good for paper cuts.

a reply to: AugustusMasonicus

So good. It was like seeing inside of the main character's mind. It led up to the full blown torture at a perfect pace. It is very darkly funny.

originally posted by: AugustusMasonicus

originally posted by: TNMockingbird
I can't imagine anything better so I am glad you went with this one.

The other one was more of a silly Q&A with an angel where the guy gets to ask any questions he wants and gets really stupid answers.

You should post that one anyway, Id like to read it. A real smart ass angel lol

originally posted by: reldra
So good. It was like seeing inside of the main character's mind. It led up to the full blown torture at a perfect pace. It is very darkly funny.

Thank you. I always knew that deep down you enjoyed light torture.

originally posted by: FauxMulder
You should post that one anyway, Id like to read it. A real smart ass angel lol

Maybe. I wasn't overly happy with it, I may rewrite it at some point.

a reply to: AugustusMasonicus

nice story. Very descriptive and subtle. Nice work.

originally posted by: network dude
nice story. Very descriptive and subtle. Nice work.

Thanks, I saved you a seat.

a reply to: AugustusMasonicus
Mason expertly done as always! Excellent! I think my bird is much nicer!

originally posted by: Martin75
Mason expertly done as always! Excellent! I think my bird is much nicer!

Thank you. And I am sure that it is.

a reply to: AugustusMasonicus

Needs more cowbell.

originally posted by: IAMTAT
Needs more cowbell.

I was going to have DB sit on the guy but that would have been really, really cruel, even for Hell's standards.

originally posted by: PageLC14
Perfect! And I loved the 'court side jester' material. Great read. Thanks for entering!

S&F

Sorry, I missed this earlier. Thank you.

i'm failing english...sorry peeps
any buddy know what year t is?
oh wait....so now this thread is no longer...
wait wrong forum, sorry?

a reply to: AugustusMasonicus

paper/hard cover would be preferable...best yet

originally posted by: peppycat
paper/hard cover would be preferable...best yet

I'll contact Scribner.