Touch The Moon And The Sun!

I'am not a writer,but i was sitting here at my PC reminiscing about the past
and decided to share
When i was growing up we live on a hill by the seashore,my brother and i
would sit on this rock and watch the moon rise over the sea,the moon would
look so Big! almost like you can just reach out and touch it,i would sit in silence
and ponder to myself how can i touch the moon? do i swim out to sea and how far?
When the sun is setting over the hill i'll ponder in silence ,if i race across the fields
would i touch the SUN?

a reply to: Ladystar

Of course you are a writer, you wrote that.

You made me think of someone I *care for who is looking at the same moon as me but, are they thinking of me?

If i could touch the moon, could I touch them?

If I swam the sea could I reach them?

If I run far and long enough would I ever get there?

That would be reaching the sun, for me.

Thanks for the reverie.

a reply to: Ladystar


Wow sounds like a picturesque backdrop. Like I can imagine the sun setting like a child's orange creamsicle melting into a sidewalk.

a reply to: Ladystar

That was really good writing.

a reply to: TNMockingbird

You're Welcome!

a reply to: Mousygretchen

Thanks for reading

a reply to: Jdennis10

Thank You!