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originally posted by: visitedbythem
a reply to: thenightisours Hey Night! This is an awsome poem, I trully love it. It has structure, but still dances like tongues of fire.
originally posted by: awareness10
KD i agree, that was an awesome piece of writing!
Deep and Thought Provoking
originally posted by: TNMockingbird
a reply to: thenightisours
Very strong emotions.
Well done, I enjoyed it even if it evoked sadness.
originally posted by: Justso
I felt your words-known to many but not expressed by others so eloquently-unrequieted love-that's pain.
originally posted by: Quantum12
a reply to: thenightisours
Awesome!
originally posted by: Quantum12
a reply to: thenightisours
Lol just a real one. Now I have to sleep as I remade the bed! Have a great day!
originally posted by: Martin75
a reply to: thenightisours
Sir KD thank you so much for sharing that was amazing. The emotions that you put into it just flowed right off the page!!! Beautiful!!!
originally posted by: SyxPak
a reply to: thenightisours
Nice one TNIO!! I could feel Your Pain. Very Nicely written!
originally posted by: marg6043
a reply to: thenightisours
Ah, the love pain, I can take that, nice poem, I already read one that is related to pain but the physical one no the love related one.