posted on Feb, 17 2016 @ 12:50 AM
Meh, not bad. I would speak up a little though, it seems you are soft voiced? Or is that just the software? I had to turn my headset all the way up to
hear you.
I didn't see anything wrong with it, it was nice. I think I would have liked a little longer pauses between sentences, and perhaps a little more
enthusiasm.
But what I've come to learn is that believing in what you are relating will cause that automatically. The more you believe in something you are
reading or talking about, and the more you feel it is important for others to understand why, the more emphatic and impactful your speech becomes.
While, just reading something to read it, or perhaps you have no interest in, the audience will be able to tell.