posted on Dec, 13 2015 @ 08:31 PM
Is it scary?
Sharp, pointy teeth are always scary.
So you clearly didn't choose poorly there. This piece would be scary to many people.
Pluses IMO:
The composition works. Especially with the profiled man's mouth pointing you to the center of the piece.
I Really like the addition of the birds for some reason I can't define as I usually cannot stand what I call "M" birds in paintings. Maybe it's
because people throw them into peaceful landscapes which to me, distract from the landscape. So, it's possible that what is normally used in a
peaceful setting but thrown into this angry, angry scene is what I like.
The emotions of wild rage and carnage definitely flow though this and any time you pick up emotion in a piece, you've done something right. The green
and the red work their complementary magic here as well.
Criticism:
The bottom part could use some work. Where the man's hair meets the other man's neck is awkward. I know you risk super mud from trying to make that
better. If you are indicating that is a decapitated head on the floor, which I believe you are, it could still use a little more at the neck.
As mentioned before, the green coupled with the red works very well. Perhaps green in the bottom panel would unify things a bit more. A touch greener
on the floor? Maybe greenish/dyed hair to both solve the hair issue and bring more green into the piece?
Either way, keep it up! I love seeing art that is unsettling or goes against "normal" art tropes.