The sacrifice

Hi guys

This is my first foray on this forum, be as gentle or harsh as you like, I've been around a long time so don't hold back.

I think you'll figure out the inspiration

"A sacrifice I say"

.............................................................."Nay 'tis but a pledge of allegiance"

*Allegiance with my blood, I'm not prepared to pay such a price*

................................................................."But you supported these friends when it cost you nought, now that the seas are turning disdainful. When in most of need, you choose to desert ? Where will you be at the final victory when we, those that cared, have vanquished our foe ? Riding on our shirt tails ? Pretending you helped ?

Or will you be true to your word and never visit this world again ?
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I'll be in the corner with a nose bleed

Cody

Awesome!

a reply to: Night Star

Thanks Night

I always promised to come here ................................... just needed the passion to write something from the heart.

Cody

a reply to: cody599

Very cool, I liked it a lot!

a reply to: cody599

Cody Bud this is Fantastic and feels like it came right from Your Heart Man!!!
Some compelling and thought provoking work here!!!

I knew ya had it in You from some of your Shed Story entries!!! Miss ya there My Friend!!

Great Job!!!!!! Syx.

a reply to: SyxPak

I miss him there too. I always have to go find him at the bolt hole. LOL

a reply to: cody599

I like it, speaks volumes.

Thanks guys

I'm no HG Wells that's for sure LOL But I enjoyed that many thanks for the encouragement.

Cody

a reply to: cody599

"So it has begun"


"When the choice was offered, the division was made.

Short sighted men thought their defining moment would lay in their willingness to pay a price for pledging allegiance, while for the rest, the question was wether or not they were willing to pledge allegiance in the first place.

Too many brothers and sisters were silenced and or taken away for merely speaking their minds and pursuing the values of freedom.

Where was the allegiance towards them, or the truth, in many cases.

You seem to foster the desire to strike your brother when he is already down, brother Cody.

You sound self rightious, and suffer the delusion that you saved this place while others stood by and did nothing, and that therefore you are a better man.

Did you ever consider that a lot of people come here for different reasons than you and have a different perspective, intellectually and emotionally, because they are not here to chit chat with their buddies."

a reply to: JuniorConstipator

Firstly welcome to ATS

You should write an intro thread that was very well written.

You sound self rightious, and suffer the delusion that you saved this place while others stood by and did nothing, and that therefore you are a better man

May I put in one of my threads ? We all like a good laugh, enjoy your time with us.



Cody

ETA: My favourite giff at the moment

Nice short story mate !!

It seems you have been admonished however, our saviour of this wasteland ....

a reply to: Timely

You haven't met my mother in law mate

NO one has been admonished, until it was by dear mater, THEN you know what it's like !!!!!!!!!!!!

Cody

Ah yes ... never say die 'til a dead horse kicks you.

Grasshopper is now re-learning the gluttony thing ...