Flower’s Humility, page 1

posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 04:41 AM

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Something I wrote just now.

I saw a flower, with her head tilted to the ground.
Why are you here? Don’t you want to be found?

Her arms on the rocks, spread out to the side.
Why are you here? Why are you trying to hide?

I picked her up, held her high above the rest.
Don’t you know, of all of the others, you are the best?

I took her with me, gave her a new place.
How long were you there, weeks, or only days?

The sun went down, the moon rose high.
Tell me why you were hiding, please, tell me why?

“I’m a flower among thorns. I didn't belong.
I was fragile, they all were so strong.”

“I tried to hide, conceal the beauty of my face.
I didn't belong there, it was a horrible place!”

You are free now. Forget about that place.
You are here now. You have received my grace.

my1percent

posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 05:58 AM

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a reply to: IndependentAgent

I think that is beautiful .
1%

iNobody

posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 06:10 AM

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I enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing. reply to: IndependentAgent

IndependentAgent

posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 06:17 AM

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a reply to: iNobody

Thanks you guys. I thought I would push myself to pick an object, and write something under 5min about it.

seentoomuch

posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 07:31 AM

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a reply to: IndependentAgent

Very Good! I really enjoyed it. I just woke up, had my cup of coffee in my hand and your poem started my day with a smile,

Thanks,

STM

edit on 16-12-2014 by seentoomuch because: (no reason given)

IndependentAgent

posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 08:16 AM

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a reply to: seentoomuch

My pleasure. I'm glad you liked it.

I.A

SyxPak

posted on Dec, 17 2014 @ 02:05 PM

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a reply to: IndependentAgent

A Deeply Touching and Moving Poem. Very Well Done!!!

Syx.

IndependentAgent

posted on Dec, 17 2014 @ 02:43 PM