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Andros Colt: Chrononaut's Trumpets of War

New story I promised

Man goes back in time .. Changes have already started

It has a long way to go

This for comments of those who like this stroy or have feedback

Originally I was not going with the intro I went with

It was going to start when Diana and Andros start talking at might

This is where I usually mess up

I make it to the school

Each and every character comes from its own story
Each has a long back ground

So it should be fun

a reply to: ripcontrol

lost an update

guess it was not supposed to be part of the story

More added for your enjoyment

Bringing on the bad guys

god i have to work on editing

So far Andros has three last names

Colt
Colter
Cross

lol

I have a list of character names but other stories ghost seem to want to be named


The name from this point forward is Colt



Anybody else see any name mistakes or logic fails

Thank you for reading

Silence Dogood

Mrs. Silence Dogood was a pen name used by Benjamin Franklin to get his work published in the New-England Courant, a newspaper founded and published by his brother James Franklin. This was after Benjamin Franklin was denied several times when he tried to publish letters under his own name in the Courant. The fifteen Mrs. Silence Dogood letters were first printed in 1722.

and

Nobel Prize. Org

and

The song played is by rascal Flats
God Bless the Broken rode


Coming up a glimpse at the Franklin Trust

Meeting some of the Professors slowly

Alcove is a psi vamp- history will come about as story goes

Azul- yes the living undead


Remember each is a character that had their own stories
(staff is..)

Next..

What plan did Alexander come up with

Remember the wisdom of Heinlein

The best way to lie is to tell the truth in such a way no one believes you

Also the only way to fight guerrillas by night ?

AGH!!!!!

I just did it again

Lost a whole set of conversations

got mad and wrote this

Samhain of Infamy: Wrath of the Giant by Andros Colt (SpookyFest)

for Zazz and halloween

A big texas sized shout out to bigfatfurrytexan






He gave me a piece of inspiration that I have needed

mind you I have been working on this story for a few years



the train of thought

I had an issue with the thread

The mods spend a lot of time thankless
refereeing, monitoring, and fixing

Then I realized

Mygod, not everyone want the acclaim

I remember years ago interacting with Bigfatfurrytexan on here


So thank you mods

And thank you bfft
something from one of those conversations came out

heres to you bro and thanks


Goes to get fiddle

War of the Revisionist: Its good to hear your Voice


The reboot

I hope it is enjoyed

Hope you like the reboot and the small changes

So far
More fleshed out characters

Better psychological points

and early twist and turns


Feedback appreciated

I snuck in two more post

So I am slowly moving things forward.

Hoefully I can deliver a better story this time.

As always feed back is appreciated on the war of the revisionist

This is what I pictured for the main house

Grey is mostly cement
brown is deck
Green is grass
light green is water pump
building off the deck is storage (deep freezers)




this is the renovated barn
Three stories
Outside deck


I hope this helps in some of the picturing

I cant believe I wrote that that quickly to cover for a mispost

Arcade games

An arcade game (or coin-op) is a coin-operated entertainment machine, usually installed in public businesses, such as restaurants, bars, and particularly amusement arcades. Most arcade games are video games, pinball machines, electro-mechanical games, redemption games, and merchandisers (such as claw cranes).

The golden age of arcade video games lasted from the late 1970s to the mid-1990s. While arcade games were still relatively popular during the late 1990s, the entertainment medium saw a continuous decline in popularity in the Western hemisphere when home-based video game consoles made the transition from 2D graphics to 3D graphics. Despite this, arcades remain popular in many parts of Asia as late as the early 2010s.

And of course

Civilization (VG)

Sid Meier's Civilization is a turn-based "4X"-type strategy video game created by Sid Meier and Bruce Shelley for MicroProse in 1991.[2][3] The game's objective is to "Build an empire to stand the test of time": it begins in 4000 BC and the players attempt to expand and develop their empires through the ages from the ancient era until modern and near-future times. It is also known simply as Civilization, or abbreviated to Civ or Civ I.

Civilization was originally developed for DOS running on a PC. It has undergone numerous revisions for various platforms (including Windows, Macintosh, Amiga, Atari ST, PlayStation, N-Gage and Super Nintendo) and now exists in several versions. A multiplayer remake, Sid Meier's CivNet was released for the PC in 1995. The N-Gage version was the last game released for the system in North America.

and

Street Fighter

Street Fighter (ストリートファイター Sutorīto Faitā?) is a 1987 arcade game developed by Capcom. It is the first competitive fighting game produced by the company and the inaugural game in the Street Fighter series. While it did not achieve the same worldwide popularity as its sequel Street Fighter II when it was first released, the original Street Fighter introduced some of the conventions made standard in later games, such as the six button controls and the use of command based special techniques.

A port for the PC Engine/TurboGrafx CD console was released under the title Fighting Street (ファイティング・ストリート Faitingu Sutorīto?) in 1988.[1] This same version was later re-released for the Wii's Virtual Console in North America on November 2, 2009,[2] and in the PAL region on November 5, 2009.

just in case

Ms. Pacman

Ms. Pac-Man (Japanese: ミズ・パックマン Hepburn: Mizu Pakkuman?) is an arcade video game from the Golden Age. It was produced by Illinois-based Midway Manufacturing corporation, the North American licensee of Pac-Man. Ms. Pac-Man was released in North America January 13, 1982,[1] following 1980's Pac-Man, and became one of the most popular video games of all time. This popularity led to its adoption as an official title by Namco, the creator of Pac-Man. The game introduced a female protagonist, new maze designs, and several other improved gameplay changes over the original title. It became the most successful American-produced arcade game, selling 115,000 arcade cabinets.[2]

I still hope for a little feed back

Most of all I hope it is a very enjoyable read

I have taken a suggestion some one gave me and am using it to further the idea of the story

I am trying to focus on the story of Andros

But I am now trying to add more senses to the story with better book writing style versus the script style
I could use some feed back if the last two or three incorporate better and seem cool

So far
Andros has learned that putting things right are doable but have a cost
For one he doesnt know himself completely

Alexander bonds with Sandra

Gretchen has to deal with her unique biology

I am keeping this page for comments so as to not cause issues and clutter up ats

Tesla Institute for Higher Learning: War of the Revisionist (CH.2)

Chapter two..

I am going with a lot more of above board's recs and

I am using something I learned here

I am going to be using pictures a little heavily

The seem to get better responses then Videos


Music I was listening to while I created the first post

Well the new post is in

www.abovetopsecret.com...

We meet Professor Fred
And a very bright student

and of

course



This is another part I had to write

I really do not know where the last part of this came from

I hope some of the future flashes are cool

That one came to me


List of stories so far


War of the Revisionist: Its good to hear your voice

Tesla Institute for Higher Learning: War of the Revisionist (ch.2)

Samhain of Infamy: Wrath of the Giant by Andros Colt (SpookyFest)

Yeti Again (SEC 2014)

To late for the Pebbles to vote (SEC 2014)