posted on Sep, 4 2014 @ 10:38 PM
Your delivery has improved exponentially. I love the choice of the main topic.
I understand that the Malaysia Airlines gag was for levity, but I don't think you bogged us down so much that we needed it. The F bomb seemed out of
place there too. The end gag was perfectly placed, though.
Please continue to slam religion and the religious. However, when you stretch the comparison of extreme Christianity to radical Islam, you should send
a wink in some form to let us know you know it's humor.
Regarding the profanity, I used it a lot when I was five. I remember being asked by a new friend, "do you always cuss this much?" I found more
creative ways to tickle taboos as I grew, but I understand how straight forward profanity can entertain the youth.
I'm not a fan of Jon Stewart anymore. The whole circus seems like a way to laugh off what's happening rather than to be active against it. However,
Jon is really good at knowing when to cuss. If you're going to cuss, he'd be a good model. However, the rest of his taboo stuff was far from subtle
the last time I watched
edit on 4-9-2014 by gentledissident because: (no reason given)